mantiscepter

Member since July 5, 2009

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Forever To Life

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 7 lines · 7 critiques

A dreamer stops
when their dreams

come true

But a person
with a vision

dreams till their
life is through

mantiscepter’s timeline

July 2024
04 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2019
04 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2014
04 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2012
22 Tue

Critiqued
"Strange Mobility" by @Kailashana2
"Love the title takes you to the strange and over to the far side's of one's imagination so for me it was a joy to read,I like reaching for the poem and the poet. insight of the written word is a morsel to be devoured a…"
21 Mon

Received a critique
on A SEED from @judyanne
"this is great wonderful descriptive and subtext the only suggestion for change 'gilded a heart' - i'd make it 'a gilded heart' and i don't think the 'it's' in the last line needs the apostrophe - that makes it 'it is' a…"
21 Mon

Critiqued
"Deposition (eddy styx)" by @Candlewitch
"A GROUP OF VERY STRONG STATEMENTS, GROOMING A COLOGE OF VISUAL DISTINCTIONS THAT DRAWS YOU CLOSER TO THE STORY-LINE. WELL WRITTEN, HAD A NICE FLOW. I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH. JOHN"
20 Sun

Received a critique
on A SEED from @Candlewitch
"A pensive poem to be sure. Very palatable. always, Cat"
19 Sat

Received a critique
on A SEED from @believe
"I like the content of this, it take one on a trip through life, loneliness, and most emotions, Well done"
July 2010
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Forever To Life from @Kailashana
"Sweet visioneering to you, rock on! Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Forever To Life from @blistered-pen
"I can picture some cute little Disney characters singing about this. It's cute and I agree with doc, very well expressed. JRS"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Forever To Life from @docmaverick
"...that sentiment expressed, before.....but, not set to rhyme. It could've been an ending to a longer poem, in my small opinion; however...it was still well expressed. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick."
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Forever To Life from @Seren
"is floating on feathers to sleep what a lovely little write to go to bed on ... nice poem John ... restful love and big hugs JayCee x x x edit: lol my names JayCee not JayVee lol"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Forever To Life
"  A dreamer stops"
Open thread 7 lines
16 Fri

Critiqued
"The Islands and the Beast" by @Ravenshakti
"Thanks for understanding, and if indeed it did help I am glad. always yours. John Mantiscepter"
15 Thu

Critiqued
"Tears from Heaven" by @xena465
"Your More than welcome, a well deserved showing of love and appreciation from not just me, but by the sum of all. Love John"
14 Wed

Received a critique
on Life Force from @greeneyes
"Autumn Is a magical time! Beautiful poem John, it makes me long for the fall.................."
14 Wed

Critiqued
"The Islands and the Beast" by @Ravenshakti
"I Loved the Poem just the way it was, I was just remembering in about 1978 I was sitting in a Denney's in lake-city [ in Seattle ] and again my lack of education I was looking for the spelling of a word, so I asked a ge…"
14 Wed

Critiqued
"Tears from Heaven" by @xena465
"Hi xena, The Memories we have that come to the surface to spread words of joy and contemplation as you do in this write are beautiful and to feel this beauty, one must be already a purist in their soul, washed at birth…"
13 Tue

Posted a poem
Life Force
"Ah to be"
Open thread 14 lines
13 Tue

Critiqued
"The Faery Dance to Heal " by @Seren
"Lovely write Seren I very much enjoyed the story line and it had a nice flow to it, I do notice when you use words that are a part of your home there. just wonderful. Love John"
12 Mon

Posted a poem
Good Time
"Silent this night"
Open thread 16 lines
11 Sun

Critiqued
"The Islands and the Beast" by @Ravenshakti
"I was ready for some coconut wine before I was done reading this. it was a great write, it was calling my name all the way through it. loved the story line, took me away. too many [ ands ] for me, sometimes they're just…"
11 Sun

Posted a poem
A Moments Time
"Drenched in a liquid"
Open thread 12 lines
09 Fri

Posted a poem
Time Prevails
"He reached with fists"
Open thread 35 lines
07 Wed

Posted a poem
Not A Number Or A Name
"To be a pod"
Open thread 42 lines
05 Mon

Posted a poem
Love Rings
"       Sitting beside"
Open thread 12 lines
04 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
04 Sun

Posted a poem
Like An Eagle
"I show with tears"
Open thread 28 lines
02 Fri

Posted a poem
Hidden Love
"Like Flickering Shadows"
Open thread 22 lines
01 Thu

Posted a poem
Her Light Is Mine
"            "
Open thread 12 lines
June 2010
27 Sun

Posted a poem
A Lovliness Of Exstasy
"To show your thoughts"
Open thread 16 lines
25 Fri

Posted a poem
Every Day
"We wake to a new day"
Open thread 44 lines
06 Sun

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
April 2010
15 Thu

Highest posting month
April 2010 — 22 poems
September 2009
15 Tue

Most-discussed work
Till I've Ended

23 critiques to date.
August 2009
05 Wed

First critique offered
on "Beguiled in Moon Dust " by @Seren
July 2009
05 Sun

First publication
A chant
04 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.