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mantiscepter
Jul 11, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

A Moments Time

Drenched in a liquid
of solitary lust
peering are the shadows
as joining mis-shaped busts
stimulating senses
of a kind I've never felt
alone among this drama
sweat with tears I melt
a thirst that's quenched
in a moment's time
with a whirling presense
in thoughts devine
— mantiscepter, Jul 11, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear John

You did it again, another fabulous write. Your wee heart and soul shines through to the core. Xena Mrs John x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Moments

And again we meet...In this moment in time, found by us two on this site of rhymes, here or there we stand divided by the oceans our lands though our lives provided, with rich a joy in words we share, the magic of living we hold with care. good always to hear from you, thank you for your time. Love John
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear John

You made me think of the moment of climax :) I dont know if I am right but bravo brilliant poetry I really thought this is again one of your best love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Climax

Well hell I'm excited now. Hi Hon' how are you? good thought but who knows what I think, just like writing, even though my spelling is weak, sometimes, glad ya liked it and we will keep trying to do our best, Big Hugs John.

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