Clay Goddess

There are so many great lines in this i dont know where to begin its bloody awesome mate LOL .... ok that's an aussism lol but its awesome I just wanted you to know how very much I loved it all this ones a beauty in word and thought ... love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall"

Congratulations !!! its a awesome poem , love and hugz Jayne x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...

"yet still” in my eyes. your diamond like dust. a crystal; remembrance . an art sculptured: bust." I love this but why all those punctuations, is there a particular way to read this? They seem to me to get in the way of the flow which is so beautiful just here that I am hindered by the symbols in beween. Maybe we should punctuate more I don't know, yet it is a given when the lines create a slight hesitation in the reading. Perhaps if you were to read it aloud for us? I WISH you would tidy it up, dust the diamond and let us see this lovely poem shine its glints out to us, unimpeded. Lovely Manticeptor of Washington, I like your favourite quote, spot on. Yours Ann of Norway

Lovely ode to a Goddess (btw the correct spelling). ~A

Sunrises soft as Whispers 
is how I’ll remember you......................(your? Or a comma after you to explain the meaning?) 
beauty” that brought beginning 
 too mornings sweet dew...................(to mornings? O r do you mean two?) from the arms of my loving
 like wind would move sand...............(I won't quibble about like and as, US and GB. I love this line too) And then some of the spacing isn't exact, do you know why I bothered to say all this? Because I love the way you have said it, its a little beauty and as such should be Perfect, don't you think, mr. Manticeptor with the threatening eyes. We won't dare to comment in case...... I do I like it very much. Yours ann of Norway

You always do have such a brilliant way with words. I would love to be portrayed this way, I love the last stanza?, paragraph?. You are such an artist. But that's why I love ur work. Always, Lyz.

Praise to the Clay Goddess. Bye again. Lyz.

Now would you PLEASE change the spelling to Clay GODDESS... you omitted a *D*. Thank you. Oh, that picture of you, is that your *Praying Mantis* pose? lol. Hugs, Anna

Beautifully written! As Jayne said so many great lines; I also liked the greatness and the beauty of this poem specially the first line was awesome; (Sunrises soft as Whispers)which grabed my attention, and kept it to the end. Enjoyed it, thanks. Sincerely Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

One thing good about being on the spotlight is that the poem won't get hidden between the pages. So it can be read and appreciated......... I agree with Wafi ,the first line is beautiful ....... by the way ........ What do you mean by Clay Goddess? darya