Seren

Aug 04, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beguiled in Moon Dust

In trickster-ed light
the moon came alive
tendrils of space
floating divine

A smiling face
cratered in time
breaks into laughter
thrilling the sublime

Clouding of mists
flow off his form
nothing of him
is of the norm

A voice from ages
vibrating light
trickling honey
and warming thighs

Beguiling maidens
from hither and yon
making them giddy
with beats to a song

Star dancing rugs in
breathless nights
moon milk his drug
and elixir delight

Moon dusted lust
with polka dot themes
swept into passion
with celestial dreams

— Seren, Aug 04, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Uh-oh

Now you've done it. You're having entirely too much fun. (No fair!) With affection, Chuck

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Chuck I went out to get dinner earlier and its a full moon here tonight ... and then moon madness hit me lmao ... just thought I would have a bit of fun *smile* ... much love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Jayne

Don't you just love the moon? It can be so inspiring, especially the grand full moon. It rained here last night so no moon was insight for us. A fun poem you have created here! Always, Cat

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Cat Big Smile

My world felt right tonight and then I saw the moon in all its big beauty it was a gorgeous night cold and brittle but awesome Cat you would have loved it ... you could see the craters it was so bright,clear skies all night long and I look out the window as I type this and can see him up there laughing big as life .... fun this was and I am glad you liked it my friend ... love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Quillsvein1

16 years 10 months ago

Your

capacity to weave such ethereal joy with your poetry never fails to amaze me. I remember the visionary period! I've lost so much of it and you seem to have retained it. As Chuck aptly noted, you're having too much fun! lol. No such thing. Great job GB

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Big Smile

I find joy in the smallest things GB ... It might be the fact I sighted a butterfly this morning LOL I know some might think me simple but when life has been rough you either drown in sorrow or blaze with life ... I choose life everytime :D ... and I agree there is no such thing as having too much fun ...just most people forget to live their life ... in a confusing world of stress and so much pressure these mystical journeys are my path to an inner peace ... much love and Hugz Jayne x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

wow

once again u have done it u are not capable of writing crap

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Green Eyes

LMAO I dont think you have read all my work yet , yup I have writen crap more times than I have writen excellence , its the journey to better myself that draws me to write these ... regards and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Geezer

16 years 10 months ago

Moon Dust

A happy, witty, write, dear heart! I just love the full moon. It can bring so many feelings to the fore. You cannot not have too much fun though. I guess that wouldn't be fair. So you will have to do pennance. How about, ten lashes with a fairy wand? Of course it may give you a laughing fit, but then you might write something just as fun, and have to have some more pennance, What a vicious circle! L & Hugz, Gee.

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

LMAO GEEEEEEEEE .....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * Big Smile *

.... lashes with a faery wand ??? OoOOOoOoOOooO my dear friend I am laughing my ass off here but you know whats funny ?? you have given me and idea for another mystical poem and this one is inspired by YOU !! ha ha ha nothing wrong with having fun my friend ... I believe that laughter really is the best medicine and take daily doses whenever I can :D big love and hugz Jayne x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

sounds enchanting

nice show! im starting to envisage fairies and fireflies dancing in its light. I love your line about moon milk being his drug that is awesome but so Is the rest of the poem thank u 4 posting -diatom shells feeling woozy spilling here and there.

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Diatom Shells thanks for the

Diatom Shells thanks for the read I am glad you enjoyed it I have been making more and more fantastical poetry, I am bewitched what can I say LOL Big smile Regards Jayne :) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Nymphs & Sprites

Hi, A truly magical ride I enjoyed. what would I change,? (NOTHING): I found,where ever I was; the tracker, and I found you!!. Now if I can remember how, to do it all again, I will surly write again. Good stuff! I'm going to read some more. see you,or hear from you. mantiscepter

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

mantiscepter

Thank you so much for the read I am so happy you found your way here ... I love writing mystical poetry and this one was just a bit of fun ... happy readings my friend will read you again soon ... take care Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

glimmering

It was nice to find your site,and read a little. I'm sure we will cross paths many times in years to come. So till the next crossing. Take care. Mantiscepter

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

I am sure we will too :)

So nice to see you out and about and exploring the site ... if you do find your having any problems dont hesitate to ask hun I am usually round at some stage in the day and if cant help you I can point you to someone that can .. Love and hugz Jayne x x... take care Ill be round reading tonight seeing what you have for me ... I read everyones poems usually at night after dinner to relax its my down time. and its nearly dinner time down under :).. x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...