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Aug 27, 2009
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The Old Road
Today we walked,
down a cobble stone road.
it led to the beach;
to a beautiful mode
will you be here tomorrow?
this question is mine;
I search too" for loving.
in each morning that shines.
We met with eyes :
that lingered in quest.
studied each movement,
our lives put to test.
in past; we held feelings.
we'd left in it's care.
not bringing to days;
for others to share.
time changes all:
as we face a new day.
the two of us wonder.
if loves still the way.
challenging memories;
closeness" brings thought.
of times we remember.
the ones we've forgot.
I know we are happy ,
when were close to each.
but still" we are careful.
just a distance" from reach.
of arms that would fondle;
hearts" that would beat.
in a rhythm eternal:
for not always" life's sweet.
down a cobble stone road.
it led to the beach;
to a beautiful mode
will you be here tomorrow?
this question is mine;
I search too" for loving.
in each morning that shines.
We met with eyes :
that lingered in quest.
studied each movement,
our lives put to test.
in past; we held feelings.
we'd left in it's care.
not bringing to days;
for others to share.
time changes all:
as we face a new day.
the two of us wonder.
if loves still the way.
challenging memories;
closeness" brings thought.
of times we remember.
the ones we've forgot.
I know we are happy ,
when were close to each.
but still" we are careful.
just a distance" from reach.
of arms that would fondle;
hearts" that would beat.
in a rhythm eternal:
for not always" life's sweet.
— mantiscepter, Aug 27, 2009
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Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Mantis
mantiscepter
16 years 11 months ago
Roads
ziggy
16 years 11 months ago
the old road
mantiscepter
16 years 11 months ago
Roads
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