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Jul 07, 2010
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Not A Number Or A Name
To be a pod
of Natures string
strung out
on life itself
hooked on air
only to survive
to a feeling
so helpless
the loss
of ones pride
a number
or a name
to follows
where we go
no choice
of salvation
of our future
can we show
lost to all
sad unkind
held in the
hopes of one
a body strong
spirits find
they're spirits
of freedom
not beast's
to be sought
to be dominated
by others
to choose
free a dominion
with a host
of thier brothers
life
casting shadows
from piers
of our past
loving not
just freedom
but a hope
that would last
of Natures string
strung out
on life itself
hooked on air
only to survive
to a feeling
so helpless
the loss
of ones pride
a number
or a name
to follows
where we go
no choice
of salvation
of our future
can we show
lost to all
sad unkind
held in the
hopes of one
a body strong
spirits find
they're spirits
of freedom
not beast's
to be sought
to be dominated
by others
to choose
free a dominion
with a host
of thier brothers
life
casting shadows
from piers
of our past
loving not
just freedom
but a hope
that would last
— mantiscepter, Jul 07, 2010
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Critiques
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
I loved it!
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
Not A Pod
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Hi John
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
Not A Pod
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
Not A Pod