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Not A Number Or A Name

To be a pod
of Natures string

strung out
on life itself

hooked on air
only to survive

to a feeling
so helpless

the loss
of ones pride

a number
or a name

to follows
where we go

no choice
of salvation

of our future
can we show

lost to all
sad unkind

 held in the
hopes of one


a body strong
spirits find

they're spirits
of freedom

not  beast's
to be sought

to be dominated
by others

to choose
free a dominion

with a host
of thier brothers

life
casting shadows

from piers
of our past

loving not
just freedom

but a hope
that would last
— mantiscepter, Jul 07, 2010

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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Not A Pod

Well it's been awhile since I've seen you, how are you and yours doing. I hope all is good. HAPPY FOURTH !!! Did ya have a good one? anyway happy you liked this write, and hope I see you soon. Till then Take care. Love John.
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Hi John

This is so lovely. I've not been on site for a few days so I'll have to catch up on my wee hubby's writes. Luv 2 u xxx Xena Mrs John Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Not A Pod

Hi xena, how's the little woman today? it was quiet on site and I missed you... glad you stopped by to see me, and give a read on this poem, was nice comment and I'm glad you thought so.
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear John

I thought this one touched on profundities ... beautiful work only one thing of th(ie)r/their brothers love and big hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Not A Pod

Sorry to disappoint. but my eighth grade education shows sometimes. and I write so fast trying to get the thoughts on paper before they leave my little brain. But other than that, happy you were pleased with 'the write itself. thanks so much for stopping in to see me. Love John