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mantiscepter
Jul 12, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Good Time

Silent this night
a moonlit scene
on the grounds
below the park

covered a blanket
in glistening a frost

lighting the tree lines
that silently bend
in  whispers of wind
as the season sends

this welcome for each
as thier hearts beseech

a freedom in sharing
this beauty in nights
as born is the tempo
bringing hope this light




— mantiscepter, Jul 12, 2010

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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Good Time

Hi Green Eyes, how are ya? glad this was good for you. hope things' are going well and life is good.thanks for reading and you comments, hope to see you again, John Big Hugs.
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

So romantic John

Very nice sweet images in this. I love it. Xena Mrs John x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Good Time

Hi xena. How are ya today, I always have a good time when your around... this was a good write for me, was fun to write, and I'm glad you noticed it and was something you liked, thanks again for stopping to visit Love. see ya later. Hubby.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest John

beautiful poem only one thing this typo this welcome for each as (thier) hearts beseech a freedom in sharing this beauty in nights as born is the tempo bringing hope this light beautiful again my friend love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Good Time

Hi Seren how is the world treating you? well I hope. your health and well being are important to many... so you liked the write. I'm so Happy. and thank you for taking the time to let me know. so Seren we will see you again, take care and keep the Faith. Lots of Love John.
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magics02

16 years ago

Manti

Another well deserved round of applause to you my friend. Good job again Love,Mona xoxox
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Good Time

Hi Mona, how have you been? still rolling I see. good to see you on the site, and happy to receive your most gracious words on this poem. Thanks see you again I hope Love ya. John

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