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Jul 02, 2010
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Hidden Love
Like Flickering Shadows
on a candle ride
this love is a feeling
I hold on to inside
rare are the moments
it will rise to show
an interest in people
surface with a glow
strange are the reasons
when it does come out
to mingle so mindless
parting lips that pout
clearied are the fears
in dreams spred fog
that gathered in bunches
like a pack of wild dogs
held dark in memories
these occasions play more
a constant reminder
when a heart tries to store
lost in loves gentle ways
with pursuing past cliches
on a candle ride
this love is a feeling
I hold on to inside
rare are the moments
it will rise to show
an interest in people
surface with a glow
strange are the reasons
when it does come out
to mingle so mindless
parting lips that pout
clearied are the fears
in dreams spred fog
that gathered in bunches
like a pack of wild dogs
held dark in memories
these occasions play more
a constant reminder
when a heart tries to store
lost in loves gentle ways
with pursuing past cliches
— mantiscepter, Jul 02, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Hey Hubby
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
corrected
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest John
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
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