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Time Prevails

He reached with fists
into the sands of time
only to find himself vacant

torn were his ragged shoes
moving slowly dragging in a
in a melodic rhythm with
yesterday's traffic still heard

he looked closely to make sense
had this day been more indifferent?
would his questions be answered?
he sat drooling and dazed alone

A question had fallen from his lips
chasing down an aging stairway
down down around cement squares
imbedded in the cracked sidewalk

where would they lead this day
with hope he ran into a dark alley
held with a stench of molding mums
still in a battle with an army of slugs

hell bent they seemed to clash with
different shades of ooze none minded
had all gone mad was a definition allowed?
short an intermezzo flails in a daydream

strained were memories a vision defined
with imperfect plans he reaches desparately
only to find torn curtains hanging frayed
colors faded with his dreams once held

dusty trinkets lined on a shelf remnants
of who he was laid solemn in a perfect
adornment as a tv flickers in the eye of
a hanging mirror it would reveal the way

so off again forward to wondrous new days
to again find his will and to buy some new shoes
sperned was the arrogance that led him astray
to the new sands of time his life will now sail


— mantiscepter, Jul 09, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Super John

This is one of your best. Lovely, so lovely. Xena Mrs John x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Time Prevails

Well- you were the first here to say how much you liked this write, and I am thankful that you did, this one took me in many directions, till I liked it. good to hear from you miss xena,till next time. Love John
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Well sweetheart

You did us proud with this and I'd like to see more like this one. Xena Your wee Scottish Mrs Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear John

Lovely poem hun ... different from your usual ... bravo taking risks love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Time Prevails

Hi love how are you. this was so different I was happy to get it finished, and when I did, It took me awhile, to say I liked it to myself, definitely was off from my usual, but all in all it was fun to write, just let go!! so thanks for the kind words, and hope we see you again soon. Love and hugs John.