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Jul 05, 2009
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A chant
An Angels reach
to embrace
blinded in passion
each do rise as
life commands
'Neath dawn
twilight chants
screaming to reside
where each fail
dreams held in
Calm indifference
acting in a role
no-one scales
alone their heart
as two survive
forums plead in a
seeking chance elated
for each are solemn
each embraced
to embrace
blinded in passion
each do rise as
life commands
'Neath dawn
twilight chants
screaming to reside
where each fail
dreams held in
Calm indifference
acting in a role
no-one scales
alone their heart
as two survive
forums plead in a
seeking chance elated
for each are solemn
each embraced
— mantiscepter, Jul 05, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
reads like a disjointed list
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
The revisions are small but effective in bringing it more
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
I Tried
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
I do not insist on full, spoonfed comprehension from any art