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A chant

 An Angels reach
to embrace
blinded  in passion
each do rise as

life commands

'Neath dawn
twilight chants
screaming to reside
where each fail

dreams  held in

Calm indifference
acting in a role
no-one scales
alone their heart

as two survive

forums plead in a 
seeking chance elated
for each are solemn
each embraced 


— mantiscepter, Jul 05, 2009

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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

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I appreciate your pursuit of understanding, and clearly I tried to make this,as clear an annotation, as I can. thank you for reading you will see the light [ each description is a clue, each one alone an answer} We see what no one else can, and feel what only we can feel. explain each thought therefor as if a mirrored image as your thoughts. use your our own perceptive reasonings. at times no one has control over these. even ourselves. Just try