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mantiscepter
Aug 25, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Always Repeating

 The tempo of the windmill blades

are as perfect as the wind

they turn with perpetual motion

like life's eternal seed.
— mantiscepter, Aug 25, 2009

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Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Mantis

This is really a great analogy I love the idea of the windmill blades being in tempo with the world ... well its a beauty my friend your just getting better and better .. love and hugz Jayne ... Btw I cannot see a thing I would change ... its perfect as is :) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

motion

as the seeds of life perpetuate, so do the days of our lives. sounds like a soap opera!!! thanx always for your comments Jaynexx made my morning... Mantiscepter