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mantiscepter
Jul 16, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Forever To Life

  A dreamer stops
when their dreams

      come true

    But a person
    with  a vision

  dreams till their
    life is through

— mantiscepter, Jul 16, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years ago

And this dreamtime wanderer

is floating on feathers to sleep what a lovely little write to go to bed on ... nice poem John ... restful love and big hugs JayCee x x x edit: lol my names JayCee not JayVee lol
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Life

Thank you Seren for your read, Sometimes we have to dream a little. float our way to sleep. Thanks again. Love John.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years ago

I've heard....

...that sentiment expressed, before.....but, not set to rhyme. It could've been an ending to a longer poem, in my small opinion; however...it was still well expressed. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Expression

We all have our own way of expressing these words that are written, or spoken from within, all is viewed in the mind of each separately. thanx for the read and comments. Mantiscepter
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blistered-pen

16 years ago

I can picture some cute

I can picture some cute little Disney characters singing about this. It's cute and I agree with doc, very well expressed. JRS
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Forever To Life

Hi B.P. good to see you again, and I'm glad you thought it was a good write and you enjoyed it. Thanx so much. Mantiscepter

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