High Sights

Crystal visions
of a mountain spring.
on a hot and humid day.

— mantiscepter, Sep 01, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Mantis

Fresh cool thoughts for a hot day ;) loved this one, our summer is coming I am looking forward to the heat this year lol its been a cold ass winter ... love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

cool

Hope all is well and glad your home. I like thoughts, and observations, kinda fun to write. glad this one was o.k. talk soon . Mantiscepter P.S. so now. your summer is my winter.

lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Mantiscepter

I wish I could look out my window on a hot humid day and in the distance see a snow capped mountain, and a clear, sparkling, like crystal, river, where I could dream of one day, dangling my feet in. What a view u have given. It's chilly and raining just enough to P me off, here. Aptly written. Loved it. Lyz

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

puffs and tufts/ high sights

Hey lyz. thanks for your comments on these poems. I lost the link to the one, so I thought I would thank you for both here. puffs, was just fun to write, and as far as high sights, I;m a dreamer, thanks again. Mantiscepter

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

You dropped a beautiful gem

All the elements of a Japanese haïku poem without being one. You dropped a beautiful gem and I am glad I noticed it as it fell like a raindrop suddenly shining, and cooling in the bright sunshine. Ann of Norway

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Clearly seen

Thanks Ann for taking your time to ,review this writing. Glad it was to your liking, Bright and fresh are good, It makes me feel alive and apart of it. so Ann of Norway, Thank you. Mantiscepter

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