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Aug 28, 2009
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The Child You See
Just throwing a rock.
to watch it splash.
with" it's rippling movements,
on the river; that clash.
to dirt wall banks.
where" they fade at end,
in light moving swells
giving face:thoughts mend.
relaxing to gaze at.
to walk along side.
followed: by many reflections,
that quietly ride.
seeing yourself .
glimpse, after glimpse.
making "silly expressions,
strutting tall" with a limp.
a feeling of goodness .
fresh; so free.
as memories; return you
to this child" you see.
lost" deep within us.
hidden in years.
brought now" to surface.
by pleasures" smiling tears.
to watch it splash.
with" it's rippling movements,
on the river; that clash.
to dirt wall banks.
where" they fade at end,
in light moving swells
giving face:thoughts mend.
relaxing to gaze at.
to walk along side.
followed: by many reflections,
that quietly ride.
seeing yourself .
glimpse, after glimpse.
making "silly expressions,
strutting tall" with a limp.
a feeling of goodness .
fresh; so free.
as memories; return you
to this child" you see.
lost" deep within us.
hidden in years.
brought now" to surface.
by pleasures" smiling tears.
— mantiscepter, Aug 28, 2009
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lyz
16 years 9 months ago
hi
DarkAngelFrm94
16 years 9 months ago
its awsum as
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Mantis
themoonman
16 years 9 months ago
Mantiscepter...
evin
16 years 9 months ago
Hello