Till I've Ended

WOW! stare not to deception let eye’s” lead by Heart fill life’s trails, found bitter with a sweetness” of tarts my love” is this darkness I always shall hold from now till I’ve ended to the touch I am cold fantastic writing... Always, Cat

Again you leave me speachless wonderful write bravo ... love and higgest bugs Jayne btw sorry for short comments its 4am I am nearly ready for bed lol

This piece is really beautiful in its entirity, bringing in the moods of m,any things from deep inside where no-one dare tread. Try not to stay in there on your own it will be like a new year celibration when you bring those feelings out, letting them rain down on our thoughts, Yours Ian.T

Spell check: Taught or taut? Well, you have blown me away. This may be a deep meaningful sad write, but this is really good. You have pushed something inside out to create this ,and it will have to be my fave of urs, now. This has feeling, it has presented well, and hey, I enjoyed it. Thank u Love Lyz. XX

John, you have out done your self! This was just beautiful! Just brilliant John, Elizabeth

reminds me of travels through Washington and down towards Yallowstone Idaho and Dakotas Loved the rail "gates" to keep in the cattle and then the fenceless highlands up and up into the sky it seemed swerving in green mounds and dotted with black cattle surreal times in our Chevrolet Van with captian seats bench seat and bed with storage the windows open the curtians fluttering as we hummed along to the highway song under the great blue of the red and white heartland thank you

This is absolutely beautiful write. I've read this quite a few times. I loved lines of this poem. Such a wonderfully constructed poem! Great write!

Congratulations on making the spotlight! This piece truly deserves it, as do you. Always, Cat

Lovely write John, I add my voice & feel what I had to say has been covered here so I just cheers you on & encourage such lovely soulful writing, lovely deep imagery... Though may I just give you the feedback that I was most confused & distracted by your use of (") in various places, am I missing something? I could be, please correct me if I have made a mistake, but (") has always signified quotation marks to me, & is usually used when quoting something in a write...eg The minister said "please Sir, can I have some more?" this morning. Hope it's ok to clarify... As I said it distracted me when I first tried to read this lovely work, that would be a shame so I just wanted to bring it to you. Cheers & well done Anni~ "Making the decision to have a child is momentous. It is to decide forever to have your heart go walking around outside your body". ~Elizabeth Stone

Mr Mantis Sir, Oh how to follow these comments now,having been away a day, you have shot up like a firework display into the spotlight. Oo I tread gingerly with a tiny ... are small glowing morsel..........(an S? or is instead of are: Singular/plural) needing mim loves rise..................(what dose mim mean?
) with a sweetness of tarts.........(the tartness of bitter I like, bitter sweet) I like that and lot more very much too. You are indeed a man of many parts. Love Ann of Norway