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Another lovely write from your pen , your working hard and its showing , I really loved the thought and the structure of this one though a little tidy up ? lol ... So I did a reformat and I think it gives it more strength but thats my opinion lol and I am not always right lol but I loved this poem and I could see it set out like this ... love and hugz Jayne x x Time sits by the side of each so passionate, Tranquil. For each that permits Prodded emotions Feelings that change the cycle, It’s flowing, This life long devotion Pacing our Days. Divided, each thought. Bearing weakness , in memory, to lead us astray. a corner lit candle. Display It’s Divorce. From time’s, ruling Palace, Fading dark, as a Vandal . from night straying eyes. passed: fleeting, in motions. sinking to depths, leaving us, in wandering rhyme. "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

You have no need to impress us with your glare, all you young poets, hark at me the old fogey being a typical old fogey!!! But you know what I mean, your poetry speakes for itself and needs no ogres or impressive pictures to send it off into the blue like a butterfly to land in the mind of us who read it. You combine the beautiful with the dark and that balance is so good, yes you kep playing your music I shall continue to enjoy listening to it John. Love Ann of Norway. P.S. I liked the arrangement Jayne did too!