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mantiscepter
Sep 03, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Existance

The Wind:
Is the breath of the Earth

Never ending.
Whispering It's story

Of when "God"
Gave forth: it's  Birth


— mantiscepter, Sep 03, 2009

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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Hi

You always seem to have a mind blowing statement with so few words, right to the point. Love it. Lyz.
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Wind

I sure try my best. sometimes, a short to the point little ditty; rolls off the presses. thanx, for noticing" and for inputting, your kind words. Mantiscepter
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 9 months ago

Mantiscepter...

I love the wind, of course it can be a destructive power that will uproot and desecrate everything in its path. But the everyday wind is really quite remarkable, which is where you were going with this I think... well done too!
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Wind

Nice to hear from you moonman,, glad to have your comments, glad you liked this one not just mellow,or visual,a part of life's" mysteries. Thanks. Mantiscepter
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

God

This friendship with the wind, has followed me through life, I am a person who is most happy, when there is solitude, alone with the elements, A great place to sit and invade all the surroundings with prodding stares and a relentless ellipse, till there is a joining of mind and space. was nice to hear these, words of encouragement. Thank you very Much. Mantiscepter