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mantiscepter
Sep 03, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Existance

The Wind:
Is the breath of the Earth

Never ending.
Whispering It's story

Of when "God"
Gave forth: it's  Birth


— mantiscepter, Sep 03, 2009

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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Hi

You always seem to have a mind blowing statement with so few words, right to the point. Love it. Lyz.
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Wind

I sure try my best. sometimes, a short to the point little ditty; rolls off the presses. thanx, for noticing" and for inputting, your kind words. Mantiscepter
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 10 months ago

Mantiscepter...

I love the wind, of course it can be a destructive power that will uproot and desecrate everything in its path. But the everyday wind is really quite remarkable, which is where you were going with this I think... well done too!
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

Wind

Nice to hear from you moonman,, glad to have your comments, glad you liked this one not just mellow,or visual,a part of life's" mysteries. Thanks. Mantiscepter
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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

God

This friendship with the wind, has followed me through life, I am a person who is most happy, when there is solitude, alone with the elements, A great place to sit and invade all the surroundings with prodding stares and a relentless ellipse, till there is a joining of mind and space. was nice to hear these, words of encouragement. Thank you very Much. Mantiscepter

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