Poetree

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Trolling on The Charper [Polari]

Posted Jul 11, 2010 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

My choice street, on the stroll,
'Bout to get me some doll,
I'm trolling on the charper,
In my favourite batts,
No time for no carper,
In they fancy hats.

In the meat market,
Got me some Cava,
Take my fag n spark it,
Suffrin' fo' some harva.
Then a dish goes by,
An' contact is made,
Caught each others eye,
An' we both wanna trade,
Then he said;
"I want you in bed
Cuz I wanna cherry a chicken,
An' chuck out's a tickin'"

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December 2011
31 Sat

Received a critique
on Under The Banyan Tree from @weirdelf
"and the dialogue reads fine. Just can't wrap my head around your use of transpired here. It is just incorrect usage. Replied would still be a part rhyme."
21 Wed

Received a critique
on Under The Banyan Tree from @weirdelf
"It's very nicely written, evocative imagery. May I suggest that in the line Within the Maharajah (when darkness draws nigh) the brackets are un-necessary and distracting, commas would do. also in the last verse the quot…"
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Received a critique
on Under The Banyan Tree from @loved
"Today I decided to read all unexplored poems composed over eons ago Why only a few , read a few I wonder , here."
May 2011
20 Fri

Received a critique
on Appearance Is Everything from @magics02
"double post (sorry:)"
20 Fri

Received a critique
on Appearance Is Everything from @magics02
"Olympic Workshop Critique They assassinate him with their piercing eyes and pointing fingers, He walks on by with his head held high, As I ache for him. If only they knew of his heart so kind, His bright light, And his…"
20 Fri

Received a critique
on Appearance Is Everything from @ziggy
"judge not and be not judged is how this one reads to me I do like the opening line as it sets the tone through out the read I see your not activity editing this one or do you intend to take any changes on board at this…"
19 Thu

Received a critique
on Mirabah Jojabo from @weirdelf
"religious allusion, I meant. The crack about science indicates that I am unsure if this is simple story-telling or a deeper allegory, if so, I fail to comprehend it."
19 Thu

Received a critique
on Mirabah Jojabo from @Kailashana2
"The title appealed to my sense of curiosity. Then the poem became curiouser and curiouser, until all that was left.... the science of poetry and accomplished rhyme. Well done. I'll let Jess answer who no one is and why…"
18 Wed

Critiqued
"Nomadic Spirit" by @xena465
"I absolutely love the imagery - it actually brought me there, I was on that bridge watching!!! Thank you Joel"
October 2010
22 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2010
11 Sun

Posted a poem
Trolling on The Charper [Polari]
"My choice street, on the stroll,"
Open thread 18 lines
10 Sat

Posted a poem
What's On Your Mind?
"What's on my mind?Hmm,"
Open thread 8 lines
04 Sun

Posted a poem
In The Name of The Game [Explicit Content]
"We didn't win the game"
Open thread 30 lines
02 Fri

Posted a poem
Alone
"I look out the window and the weather looks grim,It's like a glimpse of the future without him,"
Open thread 4 lines
June 2010
14 Mon

Critiqued
"I'm Scared Is All" by @ifoundaplace
"Brilliant!!! I love this! Thanks for commenting on my work too or I may not have found your delightful work! Joel ;-)"
13 Sun

Posted a poem
Realization
"A full moon shines across the sea,"
Open thread 12 lines
08 Tue

Critiqued
""good bye to fred & Ginger"" by @shirley harrison
"Very funny!! I was in a bit of shock reading it too as I thought it was true, I love the idea of feeding him dog food, oh and cleaning the toilet with his toothbrush lol!!!! Well done, Joel ;o)"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
I, Your Robot Boy
"I am your robot boy,"
Open thread 24 lines
07 Mon

Critiqued
""Yesterdays are forever"" by @shirley harrison
"Wow!!! I love this poem, it is sad but really gives a feeling of hope and we all need hope to carry on sometimes! Thank you, Joel ;-)"
06 Sun

Posted a poem
Again
"I tried to forgive you,And let go of the past,"
Open thread 31 lines
April 2010
24 Sat

Critiqued
"Now I Understand" by @artygirl87
"Wow!! Very good, I really enjoyed reading this and your emotions really came through from what must have been an unimaginably hard time for you! x"
14 Wed

Posted a poem
Mama Silhouette
"See that baby mama"
Open thread 26 lines
12 Mon

Posted a poem
New World Order
"They surround u"
Open thread 104 lines
11 Sun

Critiqued
"Cats" by @Skybones777
"Love it!! Well done!"
March 2010
22 Mon

Posted a poem
Shortie Don't Blaze
"Shortie don't blaze"
Open thread 30 lines
09 Tue

Critiqued
"The Regulators (Warning: not for everyone)" by @Candlewitch
"Wow! I love this! Well done! I'm just gonna go and read it again! Joel x"
09 Tue

Critiqued
"No More Pink" by @Violet123
"Thank you for sharing this with us! I really felt your pain when reading this, really well delivered! x"
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Over Hills And Forests Through
"Sister, mother to be,"
Open thread 26 lines
February 2010
19 Fri

Posted a poem
Fed up, Het up, Done
"Gotta tell ya how I feel,"
Open thread 46 lines
November 2009
15 Sun

Highest posting month
November 2009 — 8 poems
October 2009
24 Sat

First critique offered
on "Existing" by @jamadarie
23 Fri

First publication
Life Prescription (Stay Sober, And Scream)
22 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.