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Silence-smitten In Frozen Britain

Walking in Arctic-bitten,
Frozen Britain,
In the small hours,
In flurries of snow showers,
And through the chill,
The city lies still.
It's minus five degrees,
And refusing to ease.

Pacing along the icy shore,
Frigid-nosed and lips so sore,
I stop for a while,
In this land turned hostile.
And as I stare accross the bay,
Bewildered by the wintry array.
The glacial sea meets snow covered rocks,
There's no one in sight bar a hunting fox,
Not a sound anywhere,
Not a bird in the air,
In this city so vast,
I feel peace at last,
Serenity,
Tranquility!
I'm silence-smitten,
In Frozen Britain!

— Poetree, Jan 08, 2010

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

Silence

hello poetree Well thank you for reminding me as I await to return to snow closed Btitian I am due to return in a few days from the USA where the snow has been heavy and the wind chill apparantly will be much the same? As a shift worker I will feel the icy chill great poem Electric Blue
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Poetree

16 years 5 months ago

Hey

Hey, Thank you for your comment, really pleased you enjoyed it. It's true I'm afraid, it is very icy here all over the UK. I don't think it is that bad really, mainly just people over reacting because as usual no one knows how to deal with it here!!! Thanks again, Joel x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 5 months ago

Good Title...

The rhythm and pacing are good, as is the language. A refreshing theme. My favorite lines are: Pacing along the icy shore, Frigid-nosed and lips so sore, I stop for a while, In this land turned hostile. And as I stare accross the bay, Bewildered by the wintry array. Always, Cat
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Poetree

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you

Hi Cat! Thank you for the comment!!! If you like it, then I am very happy!!! How are you? Joel x