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Together Some Day

I was thinking about you,
As I do each day,
Like each morning’s new,
I feel this way,
Can’t seem to flee,
The thought of you,
My constant plea,
Makes me feel so blue.

I was wondering about you,
As I do each hour,
Like the sky is blue,
I feel your power,
Taking over my mind,
The way you do,
Making me blind,
To see what’s true.

I was dreaming about you,
As I do at night,
Like knowledge is true,
I feel contrite,
Knowing lust is wrong,
But tastes so sweet,
I’ve waited too long,
To be swept off my feet.

I was thinking about you,
As I do always,
Like one plus one is two,
I feel I’m in a daze,
Wishing you could see,
Me dancing in dismay,
Wanting us to be,
Together some day.
— Poetree, Feb 16, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is very sweet...

If only we could be loved by the one we love...seldoms happens for me. Rosina xena465
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Poetree

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

Hi, Thank you for your comments, I really appreciate it! I'm really glad that you can relate to it! I wrote this about someone I loved but couldn't pluck up the courage to tell them because I knew that they didn't feel the same way and it really hurt. Thanks once again! Joel x
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Tell me about it

Tell me about it Joel...story of my life. Never mind at least you didn't say anytning. I think we all go through this in our lives when love is not returned but we survive. keep writing your great poems. Rosina xena465
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Poetree

16 years 3 months ago

Hey

Hey, Thanks for the comment, I'm pleased you liked it and that you could feel the emotion I was portraying! Thank you, Joel x
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

i really love this!

you could have been writing from the heart and eyes of me! the title i see for this poem is simply "Wanting" however its fab the way it is! shirley harrison
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Poetree

16 years ago

Thanks

Thanks Shirley! No words can explain the great feeling of lust I have for this person, it is such an immense feeling!! Joel ;-)