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Feb 16, 2010
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Together Some Day
I was thinking about you,
As I do each day,
Like each morning’s new,
I feel this way,
Can’t seem to flee,
The thought of you,
My constant plea,
Makes me feel so blue.
I was wondering about you,
As I do each hour,
Like the sky is blue,
I feel your power,
Taking over my mind,
The way you do,
Making me blind,
To see what’s true.
I was dreaming about you,
As I do at night,
Like knowledge is true,
I feel contrite,
Knowing lust is wrong,
But tastes so sweet,
I’ve waited too long,
To be swept off my feet.
I was thinking about you,
As I do always,
Like one plus one is two,
I feel I’m in a daze,
Wishing you could see,
Me dancing in dismay,
Wanting us to be,
Together some day.
As I do each day,
Like each morning’s new,
I feel this way,
Can’t seem to flee,
The thought of you,
My constant plea,
Makes me feel so blue.
I was wondering about you,
As I do each hour,
Like the sky is blue,
I feel your power,
Taking over my mind,
The way you do,
Making me blind,
To see what’s true.
I was dreaming about you,
As I do at night,
Like knowledge is true,
I feel contrite,
Knowing lust is wrong,
But tastes so sweet,
I’ve waited too long,
To be swept off my feet.
I was thinking about you,
As I do always,
Like one plus one is two,
I feel I’m in a daze,
Wishing you could see,
Me dancing in dismay,
Wanting us to be,
Together some day.
— Poetree, Feb 16, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
This is very sweet...
Poetree
16 years 3 months ago
Hi
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Tell me about it
Dustyverse
16 years 3 months ago
I liked it...the angst comes thru clearly...great job!
Poetree
16 years 3 months ago
Hey
shirley harrison
16 years ago
i really love this!
Poetree
16 years ago
Thanks