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No More Pink

I was on my way to youBut I was not in timeWhen I got the phone callI went completely blank I never thought this day would comeYou had such a long fightWalking in the hospital was anguishYet seeing you lay there felt like a dream Lifeless you lay there covered in some plasticYour skin from pink to this horrible blueI touch your very cold handsThose hands that held me when a baby Do you hear what I am saying.Can feel my tears falling on your bodyI thought I would die once I loss youPart of me did die that day You were once my best friend and my heroNow I burst out in tears when I think of youI know I can never see or talk to you againBut my heart and mind will keep wishing
— Violet123, Mar 09, 2010

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Poetree

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you

Thank you for sharing this with us! I really felt your pain when reading this, really well delivered! x