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Poetree
Jul 10, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

What's On Your Mind?

What's on my mind?Hmm,Not enough words to find,To describe how,How I'm feeling right now.Even if I found the right words,It would hurt you too bad,Make you feel real sad,And I'm not 'bout to hurt no one.
— Poetree, Jul 10, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

How ya Doing?

I know that feeling and situation. Favorite lines are: Not enough words to find, To describe how, How I’m feeling right now. Always, Cat
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Poetree

16 years ago

Hi Cat

Hi Cat, Thank you!! "Not enough words to find, To describe how, How I’m feeling right now." That's my favourite part too, I had that on my mind for a long time and the other words I managed to wrap around it after a while. I was going to try to make this poem longer, but I ended up just liking it the way it is. Once again and as always, THANK YOU X

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