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Jan 10, 2010
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Under The Baobab Tree
A beautiful sundown,
Conjures an orange haze,
Over the shanty town,
And a crescent moon ablaze.
Strolling upon reddish ground,
Aimlessly down the lane,
Crime and grime's renowned,
Yet usual, always the same.
A silent call, a whispery cry,
I turn to face, I look to see,
Before my eyes, spiralling high,
A glorious Baobab Tree.
Big, tall, majestic and wise,
It's bark a copperish-brown,
The most enchanting sight to kiss my eyes,
Landed here upside-down.
Under the regal Baobab Tree,
Following my surprise,
I see a man watching me,
Trying to catch my eyes.
I look at him,
He looks at me,
I want him,
He wants me,
And we instantly attract.
We're in heaven.
Tall, dark and beautifully fine,
His skin a copperish-brown,
An enchanting feeling kisses my spine,
He turns me upside-down.
We're in heaven.
As the night falls,
Flowers begin to bloom,
I no longer hear his calls,
And then wake up in my room.
We're no longer in heaven.
Conjures an orange haze,
Over the shanty town,
And a crescent moon ablaze.
Strolling upon reddish ground,
Aimlessly down the lane,
Crime and grime's renowned,
Yet usual, always the same.
A silent call, a whispery cry,
I turn to face, I look to see,
Before my eyes, spiralling high,
A glorious Baobab Tree.
Big, tall, majestic and wise,
It's bark a copperish-brown,
The most enchanting sight to kiss my eyes,
Landed here upside-down.
Under the regal Baobab Tree,
Following my surprise,
I see a man watching me,
Trying to catch my eyes.
I look at him,
He looks at me,
I want him,
He wants me,
And we instantly attract.
We're in heaven.
Tall, dark and beautifully fine,
His skin a copperish-brown,
An enchanting feeling kisses my spine,
He turns me upside-down.
We're in heaven.
As the night falls,
Flowers begin to bloom,
I no longer hear his calls,
And then wake up in my room.
We're no longer in heaven.
— Poetree, Jan 10, 2010
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Poetree
16 years 4 months ago
Hey