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Jun 13, 2010
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Realization
A full moon shines across the sea,
As I begin to wonder, now I see,
I see clearer than ever before,
That you don't want me anymore.
So slowly I set sail,
Reversing as I retreat,
Drowning my sorrows in ale,
I begin to accept defeat..
Dawn rises with a thick mist,
A fog of realization,
That reminds me of when we kissed,
And how it was idealization.
As I begin to wonder, now I see,
I see clearer than ever before,
That you don't want me anymore.
So slowly I set sail,
Reversing as I retreat,
Drowning my sorrows in ale,
I begin to accept defeat..
Dawn rises with a thick mist,
A fog of realization,
That reminds me of when we kissed,
And how it was idealization.
— Poetree, Jun 13, 2010
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ifoundaplace
16 years 1 month ago
Poetree
Poetree
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Danielle,
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
very well expressed!
Poetree
16 years 1 month ago
!
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
well
Poetree
16 years 1 month ago
really
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