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Jun 13, 2010
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Realization
A full moon shines across the sea,
As I begin to wonder, now I see,
I see clearer than ever before,
That you don't want me anymore.
So slowly I set sail,
Reversing as I retreat,
Drowning my sorrows in ale,
I begin to accept defeat..
Dawn rises with a thick mist,
A fog of realization,
That reminds me of when we kissed,
And how it was idealization.
As I begin to wonder, now I see,
I see clearer than ever before,
That you don't want me anymore.
So slowly I set sail,
Reversing as I retreat,
Drowning my sorrows in ale,
I begin to accept defeat..
Dawn rises with a thick mist,
A fog of realization,
That reminds me of when we kissed,
And how it was idealization.
— Poetree, Jun 13, 2010
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ifoundaplace
15 years 12 months ago
Poetree
Poetree
15 years 12 months ago
Hi Danielle,
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
very well expressed!
Poetree
15 years 12 months ago
!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
well
Poetree
15 years 11 months ago
really