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Again

I tried to forgive you,And let go of the past,Hold on to love so true,As if today's our last,Together,However,You hurt me bad,Drove me mad,And made me sad,Again. All the times I've tried,Forgiven and forgot before,All the times you lied,Yet still you lied some more,Absurdly,Hyperbole,Driving me to engage,In a feeling of rage,That just don't age,Again. Now it's gone beyond the pale,And the love is lost,My heart's no longer for sale,At an unmutual cost,So goodbye,Don't reply,I'll be ignoring,Rapidly restoring,From all the warring,Again.
— Poetree, Jun 06, 2010

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Grassfield

16 years ago

I like the rhyme

I like the rhyme pattern...it offsets the pain and rage of the speaker...Great write!
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Poetree

16 years ago

Thank you

Thank you very much!! I really appreciate your comment and I'm really pleased that you could see/feel the emotion in it. Thanks again, Joel ;-)
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

This is very touching!

If it is a life experiance i am sorry, This is a very strong poem like a good bye letter into poetry very beautiful and yet sad As i felt your pain! well done excellent write! shirley harrison
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Poetree

16 years ago

Hi

Hi Shirley!! Thank you very much for your kind comment!! I really appreciate it and there is nothing more satisfying than when someone else can feel the emotions or relate to it! Thank you, Joel ;-)
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loved

16 years ago

to her....AXE ....

Friend POETREE If I were you I wouldn't as much As waste my time to say good bye... I’d rather leave her wondering, What scoundrel once did to me? And Since you have applied your mind And the balm of youth has healed Now move on friend The world has 6.50 billions Lined up Surely there will be a better one Waiting for thee...