Poetree

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Trolling on The Charper [Polari]

Posted Jul 11, 2010 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

My choice street, on the stroll,
'Bout to get me some doll,
I'm trolling on the charper,
In my favourite batts,
No time for no carper,
In they fancy hats.

In the meat market,
Got me some Cava,
Take my fag n spark it,
Suffrin' fo' some harva.
Then a dish goes by,
An' contact is made,
Caught each others eye,
An' we both wanna trade,
Then he said;
"I want you in bed
Cuz I wanna cherry a chicken,
An' chuck out's a tickin'"

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Received a critique
on Under The Banyan Tree from @weirdelf
"and the dialogue reads fine. Just can't wrap my head around your use of transpired here. It is just incorrect usage. Replied would still be a part rhyme."
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Received a critique
on Under The Banyan Tree from @weirdelf
"It's very nicely written, evocative imagery. May I suggest that in the line Within the Maharajah (when darkness draws nigh) the brackets are un-necessary and distracting, commas would do. also in the last verse the quot…"
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"Today I decided to read all unexplored poems composed over eons ago Why only a few , read a few I wonder , here."
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Posted a poem
Trolling on The Charper [Polari]
"My choice street, on the stroll,"
Open thread 18 lines
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What's On Your Mind?
"What's on my mind?Hmm,"
Open thread 8 lines
04 Sun

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In The Name of The Game [Explicit Content]
"We didn't win the game"
Open thread 30 lines
November 2009
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Life Prescription (Stay Sober, And Scream)
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