"Yesterdays are forever"

as i said, beautiful write. it belongs on stream love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

This poem fits that beautiful pic you have here I just love it and this poem touched me also. Good job Shirley, keep up the good work Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived Shirley sorry to hear about your brother and what a lovely poem this is girl. Love,Mona

A lovely atmospheric poem. Lou xx

And so very true to life...great write. Rosina xena465

Dear Shirley..readuing through your poetry reminded me of Charlie Chaplin's meaningful song...i am sure you know these lines... Smile though your heart is aching Smile even thoughits breaking when there are clouds in the ssky your smile will get by... hugz...raj (sublime_ocean)..

and well put together! You have a flair for making simplicity stupendous! Nicely done!

A lovely write Shirley, your getting better and better, keep it up. Love Mand

You have one stanza that really hit home with me "The person that is missing in your heart you will see him as the person he is not" so very true as we tend to see people in a different light and make of them what we wish Chrys

Great line and sentiment!but thank God for selective memory.ha!ha!I am not a big fan of most free form,but for some reason I seem to be reading yours a lot. Guess that I can be a fan whether'not I understand.......Stan

Ann of Norway I like this Shirley, and you know the brilliance of the sea, there in Southern Italy that can reflect its lights and glints of the eyes of one's well loved back to you in your tomorrows, and renew one's joy of life, despite the woes and troubles of the yesterdays. I just have a few thoughts on this and mention them below:- "The anger and the sorrow Fades with tomorrow"...........the morrow( to avoid too much repetition of tomorrow?) "We all are sure to die"....could it be... we're all sue to die? Its a tiny bit clumsy with the all ! "They can never be forgotten!"......And can never be forgotten( just a thought?) Love to all your tomorrows may they be full of happiness, Ann.

Shirley, a great write and beautifully sculptured and delivered. Just to be a pain in the arse - "There are so many yesterdays, But sadly no tomorrows" - surely every tomorrow becomes a yesterday in two days time? I'm just messin' with ya! I think you have written a beautiful piece here - well done my friend, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

I wish I had of known that it was about - I wouldn't have had a little laugh. I do hope you accept my apologies for not realising the sad nature of the write. I feel bad now, even if I did make you smile. I will check the Hunch poem out shortly...after a cig! Dan ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Shirley, phew! I had two cigs and a strong coffee, I was worried there for a while. We'll have plenty of tomorrows - thank you, Dan ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Shirley, you are going to have to let me have your address because I have a gift for you? A DICTIONARY! sercamstances!!! shockingly bad...Lol!...try circumstances!! I'll need another cig now to stop me laughing, you're the best, Dan ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Yesterdays are buried Tomorrows haven’t yet arrived And When they do They become today. So stay awake Live today Like One may not perhaps Not live another day Happy day today!

Wow!!! I love this poem, it is sad but really gives a feeling of hope and we all need hope to carry on sometimes! Thank you, Joel ;-)