JWwildcat2012

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Whispers

Posted Sep 2, 2009 · 13 lines · 2 critiques

                                   I open my eyes to my world
                                 and as I walk,I hear a whisper.
                       It tells me that all is changing around me
                                          then I look around......
                                   to find that all HAS changed.
                             The angelic white snow has fallen
                          and the blue skies mirror themselves
                         upon the frozen waters beneath my feet.
                                     I hurry my pace to slide
                        as the whisper finds my ear once more....
                     And I discover that it is the crisp winter wind
                              cutting across my contented face,
                            And I close my eyes to that paradise.

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April 2012
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First poem published 1 days later.
September 2009
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Little Eyes from @lyz
"Sweet, heartfelt and true. I wish I had what little eyes see, again, such a lovely write. Lyz XX"
05 Sat

Received a critique
on Whispers from @lyz
"Ooh yea, love this one too, you can actually feel your there with this one James. Really enjoyed. Lyz"
02 Wed

Received a critique
on Whispers from @Seren
"I live in a country that only has ice skating in arenas mainly lol I've only skated once in my life ... but now feel I ahve done it for real , in word, but its real how beautiful this was love it ... Kind Regards Jayne…"
02 Wed

Posted a poem
Whispers
"                                   I open my eyes to my world"
Open thread 13 lines
02 Wed

Received a critique
on As The Sun Fades Away from @lyz
"Yes I concur with the others, apart from that, a sad but brilliant write, once again. Lyz"
01 Tue

Received a critique
on As The Sun Fades Away from @infinite_dwarf
"Or, running with Gee's suggestion up there, a replacement with 'doubt-filled face'? Your closing lines with the moon's participation were especially good. Excellent selection of the title, too. ~Jess K. ----------------…"
01 Tue

Received a critique
on As The Sun Fades Away from @Geezer
"Yes, mourning is something that we all have to ultimatly do alone. I would change very little about this, but I would like to see [doubted] replaced, doubted face? Try, saddened, mournful, etc. And a friend [among] me?…"
01 Tue

Posted a poem
As The Sun Fades Away
"                                    A sun sinks low to a dark,red sky"
Open thread 15 lines
August 2009
31 Mon

Received a critique
on The Lone Harvester from @lyz
"You put this one in my head, you actually feel for all farmers, but to see the look on those other dicks faces, bought a smile to mine.Believing and faith has shone into your poem. Great storytelling type of write. My f…"
31 Mon

Received a critique
on An Angel Walks from @lyz
"Heaven and your angel are surely watching over you. Loving your writes. Very talented. I believe in Angels and I believe my son is one, so I am really enjoying your sharing. Lyz."
28 Fri

Posted a poem
The Other Side.
"                                 Darkness falls...."
Open thread 13 lines
26 Wed

Posted a poem
Like Crystal
"                                                Some days I view the weary world"
Open thread 16 lines
25 Tue

Posted a poem
Angels In Waiting
"                                         "
Open thread 24 lines
24 Mon

Posted a poem
She Comes And Goes
"                                           As a breeze will blow hurriedly"
Open thread 22 lines
21 Fri

Posted a poem
An Angel Walks
"                                                                              I have to myself"
Open thread 20 lines
March 2009
01 Sun

Posted a poem
I Walk
"                                            I walk with honor."
Open thread 16 lines
February 2009
28 Sat

Posted a poem
The Lone Harvester
"                                                    T'was an old man one winter,"
Open thread 32 lines
27 Fri

Posted a poem
Paradise Hidden
"                                                 I am awakened from childlike slumber"
Open thread 16 lines
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Virgin Sacrifice" by @Rett
"Up until the final stanza.There was something about it,a missingness to it.....was it needing rewording...an additional stanza?....I dont know.Its probably just me.I liked that the words were sharp,and they linked to th…"
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Bubba and His Christmas Stocking Also, A Wish for You" by @Rett
"And a hilarious one at that!Every time i search for good stuff,and come across something you posted,i find it.This one had very good rhythm and structure,and it compliments the now classic comedy song Grandma Got Run Ov…"
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Waterproof" by @Rett
"This poem was a rib-tickling read.One thing though:The character in the write would come across twice as funny if given a name,and the addition of a few more hilarious lines,I think. I liked the write.Good job! Your fri…"
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Ballad of Cactus Jack" by @Rett
".....and fun!I enjoyed reading it.If this is not a published work for a book of your own,or even for a compilation,it should be.The character of Cactus Jack was fleshed out cleverly,and hilariously.Humor is my favorite…"
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Currents And Circles" by @poewriter58
"A good write,especially when one is done for a friend.I find that when a special poem is created,the creative images,words,and emotions within the poem are greatly amplified.In other words,the writer's spark for creatin…"
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Imprisoned yoghurt top" by @Nordic cloud
"Its funny.I just replied to a comment that i recieved to a poem,and I was saying how the things that surrounded us has the ability and opportunity to become a poem.This write is proof positive.The descriptive flow in th…"
25 Wed

Posted a poem
Little Eyes
"                                              Little eyes of youth"
Open thread 22 lines
25 Wed

Critiqued
"Periods" by @themoonman
"I was picturing anyone in this write,being in the"padded room"that you penned down.The loneliness,and the doomed feeling of the character was well described.Dark humor at the end,was my favorite part.The character,as he…"
25 Wed

Critiqued
"Dismal Swamp" by @themoonman
"The best part of reading this poem was that it sounded like something someone would claim it was from a book,and then tell it around a fun campfire to scare their friends!I can see why you said that it was a fun write.I…"
24 Tue

Posted a poem
The Stars Are Human,Too
"                                        On many midnights weary"
Open thread 17 lines
21 Sat

First critique offered
on "Day's End" by @yenti
15 Sun

Highest posting month
February 2009 — 10 poems
April 2008
23 Wed

First publication
I Stand Alone

About Me

About me

My name is Scott, and I am from Brownsville, Kentucky. I have blue eyes, brown hair. I am 5'10 and 215 lbs. My hobbies include sketching and writing. I also enjoy action and comedy movies,and love Italian food.

Location: Brownsville,KY USA

Favorite Poets

D. H Lawrence and Robert Frost

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on Little Eyes from @lyz

on Whispers from @lyz

on Whispers from @Seren

on As The Sun Fades Away from @lyz

on As The Sun Fades Away from @infinite_dwarf

on As The Sun Fades Away from @Geezer

on The Lone Harvester from @lyz

on An Angel Walks from @lyz

"Virgin Sacrifice" by @Rett

"Bubba and His Christmas Stocking Also, A Wish for You" by @Rett

"Waterproof" by @Rett

"Ballad of Cactus Jack" by @Rett

"Currents And Circles" by @poewriter58

"Imprisoned yoghurt top" by @Nordic cloud

"Periods" by @themoonman

"Dismal Swamp" by @themoonman

on "Day's End" by @yenti

February 2009 — 10 poems

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