Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Sep 01, 2009
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
As The Sun Fades Away
A sun sinks low to a dark,red sky
and as the broad horizon turns to midnight blue
I am saddened.
My eyes tear strong as the sea
whose crashing waves cannot dare sound
like the drops that fall from my doubt-filled face
and find their fate upon the weathered earth.
As the moon replaces the fiery sun.....
it asks me why I am crying with its glow.
I look to it,clutching angry fists
to reply that a friend has crossed to another shore.
and as I lower my eyes to my feet
that same moon offers its silvery light to everything,
with stars coming out from their cloud cloaked beds
to join the moon and I in quiet mourning.
and as the broad horizon turns to midnight blue
I am saddened.
My eyes tear strong as the sea
whose crashing waves cannot dare sound
like the drops that fall from my doubt-filled face
and find their fate upon the weathered earth.
As the moon replaces the fiery sun.....
it asks me why I am crying with its glow.
I look to it,clutching angry fists
to reply that a friend has crossed to another shore.
and as I lower my eyes to my feet
that same moon offers its silvery light to everything,
with stars coming out from their cloud cloaked beds
to join the moon and I in quiet mourning.
— JWwildcat2012, Sep 01, 2009
Share this poem
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
As the sun fades...
infinite_dwarf
16 years 9 months ago
Scott
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Hi