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Day's End
Day's End
As the day draws to its heart the evening
To prepare for the night think on these things
Those that please the mind
Think of things that went well
Then think of feelings that spin you gently
As a ballerina's dress
Follow the lace turning slowly turning
Into the darkness of dream times
Where the lights from being,
Throws no shadow on your ways
Glow with the softness of just being you
Think that all things new
Are there to please your sleep time
Join me in this dream of mine,
Where free from troubles
That are sown, we drift away,
Then are gone
To places now showing warm times
There to be with yours and mine
Just feelings take them one by one
Let them kiss as the warmth of the sun
Our minds to rest them in our ways
Tomorrow’s dreams of peace and love
A gift or two from those we love
Not a gift purchased for me
Something given that’s oh so free
To give this way is so good indeed
It’s my wishes for the things I need
Journeys time in dreams come true
To spend this little time with you
Ian.T
Critiques
JWwildcat2012
17 years 3 months ago
Wonderful poem,Ian.....
yenti
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you Scott
Geremia
17 years 3 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaBeauty of