Geremia

Member since October 28, 2010

Member for 15 years, 7 months

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REDEMPTIO

Posted Jun 21, 2017 · 10 lines · 3 critiques

REDEMPTIO

The devil plays his seduction
and with savage fury rips into my soul.
I wait for the Messenger
hovering
in shadows dark and cold;
my body begins to whither.
my heart is sick with fearful imaginations
and flaming arrows destroy
all hopes of redemption.

Geremia’s timeline

October 2025
28 Tue

Anniversary
15 years of membership
October 2020
28 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
June 2017
22 Thu

Received a critique
on UNSPEAKABLE from @Eumolpus
"That's hoe I feel after watching 10 minutes of daily world news. You don't need more. I'm trying to figure out how not to despair right now. I'm trying to write a poem about it. I'm not getting very far. Your poem is gr…"
22 Thu

Received a critique
on REDEMPTIO from @Candlewitch
"may peace be your ultimate reward...your words will be remembered. *hugs, Cat"
22 Thu

Received a critique
on UNSPEAKABLE from @Candlewitch
"an eloquent poem nicely penned with class and dignity. to despair is to give up and give in. but one can always reach out and grab on to the light once again. *hugs, Cat"
21 Wed

Posted a poem
REDEMPTIO
"REDEMPTIO"
Open thread 10 lines
14 Wed

Posted a poem
LOST IN ILLUSION
"LOST IN ILLUSION"
Open thread 9 lines
April 2017
01 Sat

Posted a poem
After the garden
"AFTER THE GARDEN"
Open thread 14 lines
October 2015
28 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2012
10 Sun

Posting milestone
500 poems posted
October 2011
28 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2010
28 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
February 2010
25 Thu

Critique milestone
1,000 critiques given
June 2009
06 Sat

Most-discussed work
THE "BEAST" :Parkinson's-ending revised

39 critiques to date.
March 2009
24 Tue

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
15 Sun

Highest posting month
March 2009 — 30 poems
November 2008
02 Sun

First critique offered
on "YOU ARE MY OBSESSION!!!!!" (since unpublished) by @Jasmine
01 Sat

First publication
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