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Aug 24, 2009
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She Comes And Goes
As a breeze will blow hurriedly
across a sunlit prairie,
or the last winter snow will fall
and blanket a cold country landscape,
I find to sad revelation
that like those things........
my angel comes and goes.
Sometimes,she smiles.
Softened lips will open,
and angelic words will spill forth
as the waters of a rushing waterfall,
and they splash helplessly through my heart...
....and straight to my soul.
Even still,like the sunrises and sunsets of evenings past,
where I call melodiously to her......
My angel once more,comes and goes.
One day,she will come again.
And then will I wait for her at the gate of my dreams
for her sure arrival.
And when she passes,
I will claim her to me,asking with a kiss
for my angel to depart never more.
across a sunlit prairie,
or the last winter snow will fall
and blanket a cold country landscape,
I find to sad revelation
that like those things........
my angel comes and goes.
Sometimes,she smiles.
Softened lips will open,
and angelic words will spill forth
as the waters of a rushing waterfall,
and they splash helplessly through my heart...
....and straight to my soul.
Even still,like the sunrises and sunsets of evenings past,
where I call melodiously to her......
My angel once more,comes and goes.
One day,she will come again.
And then will I wait for her at the gate of my dreams
for her sure arrival.
And when she passes,
I will claim her to me,asking with a kiss
for my angel to depart never more.
— JWwildcat2012, Aug 24, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Lovely write and its
infinite_dwarf
16 years 9 months ago
James
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh Scott may your angel come to you
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear James