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Like Crystal

                                                Some days I view the weary world
                                             to find that it can never be like crystal.
                                   As our world darkens,crystal stays bright as day.
                          And while our world goes tarnished,crystal exists as pure
                                           as the diamonds we find in our roughs.
                                            In crystal there is unchallenged beauty,
                                       and she catches our gazes like a lost treasure.
                                              Though there is nothing like crystal,
                                           we still believe we can imitate her shine.
                                                     So our tiring hands toil on it......
                                             failing to glitter with each setting sun......
                                                  and spite of every mortals belief,
                                                      I keep that secret to myself
                            and I laugh,while in the midst of this stubborn universe
                            knowing that while the weary world tries with its might,
                                           it can never........ever.........be like crystal.
— JWwildcat2012, Aug 26, 2009

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Region, Country: Brownsville,KY USA

Favorite Poets: D. H Lawrence and Robert Frost

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

I disagree that all people fail to make their crystals glitter,

Do you mean that the earth, the globe, is a crystal? If so this is rather nice, the sun shining on the different sides never giving up on us, never dying out, always shining as it does. And then you are comparing us to that crystal saying we can never shine like it, am I understanding what you mean Scott? I disagree that all people fail to make their crystals glitter, each has the tiny metamorphosis of light that the sun creates within us and which keeps us alive at all, and some reflect this wonderful glittering light from themselves even in their desperation and the darkness of this funny old world. I need your 'inspill' in-play here, input I suppose, to explain to this non-crystal what the crystal is all about. Yours Ann of Norway. Are they anything like this? :- Swedish "Stars" by Edith Södergran:- Stjärnorna När natten kommer                                        When the night comes 
står jag på trappan och lyssnar,                     I stand on the steps and listen 
stjärnorna svärma i trädgården                       the stars are swarming in the garden
 och jag står ute i mörkret.                               and I stand out in the dark 
Hör, en stjärna föll med en klang!                  Listen, a star fell with a clang! 
Gå icke ut i gräset med bara fötter;                Don't go out in the grass with bare feet;
 min trädgård är full av skärvor.                       My garden is full of splinters. My bad translation no doubt!! Ann
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JWwildcat2012

16 years 9 months ago

No,Ann....I believe every one is a unique"crystal".......

....but you see,I had wrote the piece for an actual girl NAMED crystal,and I guess i tried too poetically to single her out in it.(lol)I wanted her to know that she is THE most beautiful girl my eyes see by what I wrote,as she is a girl I really like a whole lot. I also hope we can date more frequently,as right now we dont get to see each other as much as we want to. My crystal will come to me in time,though......LOL!! I hope you still liked this write,despite the confusion.And thank you for reading it................Scott.
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear James

Title, yep.It appeals to me, I understand to a degree, the meaning of your words.We all want to be beautiful, Beauty in the eye of the beholder, wanting to shine above the rest, recognition, to never fade and die, look I could go on forever, but I wont. I may have read too much from your words but I did like the write and the way you portrayed. Lyz.