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Whispers

                                   I open my eyes to my world
                                 and as I walk,I hear a whisper.
                       It tells me that all is changing around me
                                          then I look around......
                                   to find that all HAS changed.
                             The angelic white snow has fallen
                          and the blue skies mirror themselves
                         upon the frozen waters beneath my feet.
                                       I hurry my pace to slide
                        as the whisper finds my ear once more....
                     And I discover that it is the crisp winter wind
                              cutting across my contented face,
                            And I close my eyes to that paradise.
— JWwildcat2012, Sep 02, 2009

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Region, Country: Brownsville,KY USA

Favorite Poets: D. H Lawrence and Robert Frost

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Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear James

I live in a country that only has ice skating in arenas mainly lol I've only skated once in my life ... but now feel I ahve done it for real , in word, but its real how beautiful this was love it ... Kind Regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear James

Ooh yea, love this one too, you can actually feel your there with this one James. Really enjoyed. Lyz

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