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The Lone Harvester

                                                    T'was an old man one winter,
                                                          on a stead all his own.
                                                 who had reaped a great harvest
                                                    from the crops he had grown.

                                                       He had joyed to the fullest
                                                        for his minimum of seed
                                                        was enough to do justice
                                                          and to satisfy his need.

                                                The man farmed through his days
                                                    filled with sickness and pain.
                                                 dealt with fields that were barren
                                                           and devoid of the rain.

                                                       Other farmers grew fields
                                                            but were lazy in plan.
                                                   In their own lives they boasted
                                                       and ridiculed the old man.

                                                      They all spouted,"How silly."
                                                   "What does the old man know?"
                                                      "He is lacked of resources!"
                                                        "He has nothing to grow!"

                                                       But their faces were afrown
                                                   when their seasons were done....
                                                  The old mans' crops were plenty
                                                   while they found they had none.

                                                        So they asked to the elder,
                                                      "How have you such a gain?"
                                                    We all owned the same fields,
                                                     given the same sun and rain?"

                                                        He replied,"It was simple."
                                                      "I had faith that stayed true....
                                                    " And if yours not had faltered,
                                                You would have reaped a gain,too."


— JWwildcat2012, Feb 28, 2009

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Region, Country: Brownsville,KY USA

Favorite Poets: D. H Lawrence and Robert Frost

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Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Scott, This is Wonderful!

This is a great write. Your rhythm was flawless, the rhymes simple and effective and the moral of the story told was exemplary. It is so nice to see someone pay attention to their poetry as you have in this one. Rhyme is my favorite form and I thoroughly enjoyed this. More people need to discover your writing here as they will Really enjoy it! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
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JWwildcat2012

17 years 3 months ago

Your comment is what i am looking for,Rett

The ultimate goal of my being a member of Neopoet is to earn comments like the one you have given me.I have worked lately with every technique i can to get more readers to notice what ive been posting.Ive tried formatting to make the poems visually appealing,and i experiment between rhyme scheme and free verse compositions.Topics,of course are hit and miss because everyone is unique with what interests them.They may choose to hear about family oriented writings,humor,or the macabre,such as the style of Edgar Allen Poe.And sometimes,they look for deep emotion within a write.So it is no surprise that i pay attention to their suggestions.Still,I want to have a little bit of everything when i write,so that my writings show versatility.I think i am going to try to put some humor in my future posts. Wish me luck on that(LOL).Thanks for reading.You are always welcome on my page. Your friend,in peace, Scott.
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear James

You put this one in my head, you actually feel for all farmers, but to see the look on those other dicks faces, bought a smile to mine.Believing and faith has shone into your poem. Great storytelling type of write. My fave Authors are Stephen King, Helene Steiner Rice and yes, Edgar Allan Poe. I had a garage sale years ago and mistakenly put out a set of books(12) volumes,of his works.Because they were in the bottom of kids books, I had forgotten. The box went for $5.00. My husband still curses me, as do I. Lyz