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Feb 19, 2009
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As the soldier marched on
Looking back,I remember still
the grand parade.
the bands,they dressed
in all the colors of the world
with dancers dancing to the sounds
of their triumphant tunes behind them.
I smiled,and clutched my baby doll tightly
thinking that the glitter of the decorative floats
would never end.
Then,suddenly,the soldiers came.
The streets were forest green in seconds
and I stood earthly still in their presence
even as my doll fell away from cradled arms.
I trembled slightly as they passed,
even more so,when one of them broke stern march
and progressed towards me.
I closed my eyes in childish fright.......
......I then opened to my dolls'embrace.....
looking up,as the soldier marched on.
the grand parade.
the bands,they dressed
in all the colors of the world
with dancers dancing to the sounds
of their triumphant tunes behind them.
I smiled,and clutched my baby doll tightly
thinking that the glitter of the decorative floats
would never end.
Then,suddenly,the soldiers came.
The streets were forest green in seconds
and I stood earthly still in their presence
even as my doll fell away from cradled arms.
I trembled slightly as they passed,
even more so,when one of them broke stern march
and progressed towards me.
I closed my eyes in childish fright.......
......I then opened to my dolls'embrace.....
looking up,as the soldier marched on.
— JWwildcat2012, Feb 19, 2009
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Critiques
Robert Melliard
17 years 3 months ago
A tribute ?
JWwildcat2012
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks
JWwildcat2012
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you Amartya
LissaMine
17 years 3 months ago
Childhood Fears