Tuttey

Member since August 20, 2007

Member for 18 years, 9 months

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34 Poems

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Taker of Loves Beggar

Posted Jun 20, 2010 · 7 lines · 1 critiques

Stolen through the night…

Deceit stalks loves beggar.
Conveying trinkets of adoration.

Steeped in fates ring of fire…

Blinders detach to reveal taker.
Knowledge begets stupidity.

Loves beggar scatters taker.

Tuttey’s timeline

August 2022
19 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
August 2017
19 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
August 2012
19 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
27 Sun

Received a critique
on Taker of Loves Beggar from @Candlewitch
"Very interesting and intriguing imagery. It's dark, which appeals to me, also very clever. My favorite lines are: Blinders detach to reveal taker. Knowledge begets stupidity. I have no suggestions. Always, Cat"
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Taker of Loves Beggar
"Stolen through the night…"
Open thread 7 lines
April 2009
04 Sat

Received a critique
on Crystal Mountains from @themoonman
"Sweet is the pain of truly living... I thought this entire poem was written so very well but the final line rang so true it put me there... excellent poem! Richard"
03 Fri

Received a critique
on Severed from @themoonman
"Hi Tuttey, I see by your profile you are no stranger to poetry or Neopoet... but this is my first read of your work, for me, while very descriptive, it seems to be leaving out the reader, not letting them experience at…"
March 2009
31 Tue

Posted a poem
Crystal Mountains
"Tides of rescue rise and fall."
Open thread 10 lines
12 Thu

Posted a poem
Severed
" "
Open thread 13 lines
February 2009
02 Mon

Received a critique
on Discovery from @Wordsmith
"This is very very nice. The first word that came to my mind after I read your poem was "blockbuster." I wondered why and read it again. Then there it was, the message was crystal clear. It is a poem meant for anyone and…"
January 2009
27 Tue

Posted a poem
Discovery
"Suspended in time, thoughts collide."
Open thread 7 lines
August 2008
19 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2008
27 Sun

Received a critique
on Found Alone from @IKnowNoBox
"Found alone...Mind set abroad...I wish I was someplace else but then i think i will still be by myself there as well.Well written. In ink, David"
27 Sun

Posted a poem
Found Alone
" "
Open thread 14 lines
November 2007
10 Sat

Received a critique
on Lost from @Conect11
"not to piss on your parade, but a few things here: 1. your poem would work alot better if... oh hell, it would start to be a poem if you'd abandon the concept of making each line its own sentence. When I read it as you…"
10 Sat

Received a critique
on Learnt By Heart from @weirdelf
"any reference to bearing a cross is just stupid christian original sin so me. cheers, Jess"
10 Sat

Received a critique
on Lost from @weirdelf
"poor soul in misery, but use your words to make them work for others, not just about whinging cheers, Jess"
10 Sat

Posted a poem
Lost
"This black hole called life so irreparably damaged."
Open thread 11 lines
10 Sat

Posted a poem
Learnt By Heart
" "
Open thread 9 lines
September 2007
26 Wed

Critiqued
"revolutionary scar" by @orgami
"The first read through I got something different. Then I read your comments and had to read through again. I was moved to tears. Deep breaths... T"
26 Wed

Critiqued
"People" by @KDAsnake
"The ones we love matter the most."
22 Sat

Posted a poem
Bamboozle
" "
Open thread 22 lines
22 Sat

Posted a poem
I feel no comfort
" "
Open thread 10 lines
21 Fri

Posted a poem
Rocks
" "
Open thread 32 lines
21 Fri

Critiqued
"The Unknown" by @Frost Smith
"The end is of no consquence being awake and experiencing is the smack. T P.S. Don't hate me!"
21 Fri

Critiqued
"Over there" by @Frost Smith
"I am skipping and singing. Singing and skipping I skip. Sing and Skip Skip and sing Where did you say. Oh! Over there!"
21 Fri

Critiqued
"The lost fortress of happy" by @Frost Smith
"Yet... I have been there once or thrice upon my steed in the heed. I don't know that you know but... I seem to see. Let it be. Well done! KUDOS!!! T"
20 Thu

Critiqued
"Straight to Concrete" by @IKnowNoBox
"At first I felt I was going in reverse. After reading the first few verses I realized I was going forward. I have a hard time giving constructive thoughts for who am I to judge someone elses art. Here we go... If you sw…"
20 Thu

Critiqued
"Shaving in the Dark" by @waterdragon
"I like the flow it seems to lose the rhyme and there it is. It could be said the rhyme is set out of place but it flows. KUDOS! T"
20 Thu

Critiqued
"Hither, Hither" by @oklahoma_girl2009
"So much said but not if only read. Kudos! T"
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Out of our control
" "
Open thread 7 lines
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Misconceptions
" "
Open thread 12 lines
15 Sat

Highest posting month
September 2007 — 21 poems
August 2007
22 Wed

First critique offered
on "Demon of me" by @CryingPagan89
20 Mon

First publication
Existence
19 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.