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Tuttey
Jun 20, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Taker of Loves Beggar


Stolen through the night…

Deceit stalks loves beggar.
Conveying trinkets of adoration.

Steeped in fates ring of fire…

Blinders detach to reveal taker.
Knowledge begets stupidity.

Loves beggar scatters taker.

— Tuttey, Jun 20, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Hello

Very interesting and intriguing imagery. It's dark, which appeals to me, also very clever. My favorite lines are: Blinders detach to reveal taker. Knowledge begets stupidity. I have no suggestions. Always, Cat