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Tuttey
Jun 20, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Taker of Loves Beggar


Stolen through the night…

Deceit stalks loves beggar.
Conveying trinkets of adoration.

Steeped in fates ring of fire…

Blinders detach to reveal taker.
Knowledge begets stupidity.

Loves beggar scatters taker.

— Tuttey, Jun 20, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hello

Very interesting and intriguing imagery. It's dark, which appeals to me, also very clever. My favorite lines are: Blinders detach to reveal taker. Knowledge begets stupidity. I have no suggestions. Always, Cat

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