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Tuttey
Jan 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Discovery


Suspended in time, thoughts collide.
Retrospect leads the way to awareness.

Seeing why's and how's pave the path
away from self inflicted pain.

A light once doused shines from within.
Happiness re-writes a soul once in despair.

 
— Tuttey, Jan 27, 2009

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Wordsmith

17 years 4 months ago

Discovery

This is very very nice. The first word that came to my mind after I read your poem was "blockbuster." I wondered why and read it again. Then there it was, the message was crystal clear. It is a poem meant for anyone and everyone. No one can really escape your words. Paragraph 1) Introduction... it catches one's attention quickly. Paragraph 2) The message is or can be found in this paragraph. Paragraph 3) Bam! It wraps up the entire poem and leaves no loose strings behind. Very nice.