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oklahoma_girl2009

Sep 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hither, Hither

Hither hither you shall see,

How obedient I can be.

You may think I can’t at all,

But I shall break through that wall.

And when I do you shall see,

How obedient I can be.

— oklahoma_girl2009, Sep 20, 2007

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T

18 years 8 months ago

Well put!

So much said but not if only read. Kudos! T

I

18 years 8 months ago

It is in bloom,

a bud of what's to become,a poet. in ink, David

18 years 8 months ago

I like your poem

in 7th I was as disobedient as I could be but your poem is certainly of the innocense and quite wonderfully done for your age then. Thanks, Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Looking back...

It can be fun too look back at what we wrote when we started to write; I recently dug out my work from when I began; it was atrocious; I got a good laugh at myself, but is also cool to see the progress.