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oklahoma_girl2009

Sep 20, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Hither, Hither

Hither hither you shall see,

How obedient I can be.

You may think I can’t at all,

But I shall break through that wall.

And when I do you shall see,

How obedient I can be.

— oklahoma_girl2009, Sep 20, 2007

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T

18 years 10 months ago

Well put!

So much said but not if only read. Kudos! T

I

18 years 10 months ago

It is in bloom,

a bud of what's to become,a poet. in ink, David

18 years 10 months ago

I like your poem

in 7th I was as disobedient as I could be but your poem is certainly of the innocense and quite wonderfully done for your age then. Thanks, Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Looking back...

It can be fun too look back at what we wrote when we started to write; I recently dug out my work from when I began; it was atrocious; I got a good laugh at myself, but is also cool to see the progress.

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