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Tuttey
Sep 11, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Once Upon A Time

 
Everlasting memories sail away yet mean so much.
Learnt by heart, smell of your skin and sense of your touch.

 

Here for a moment… now gone on wind with an ocean tide.
If only to taste your kiss… sweet lips soft upon mine.

 

My soul remembers another place somewhere in time.
Not worthy of a love so sweet enriched herewith by heart.
 

— Tuttey, Sep 11, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Nice Nice

Tuttey, A very nice poem - an expression of remebering love and wanting for it. We are all hungry yes? Very well done, Mark I am curious to know how your students recieved the idea and work of poetry. Also I am extreemly curious as to how you presented the idea of poetry to them.
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Tuttey

18 years 9 months ago

Thank you

I am not a teacher though at one time I thought about it.
Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Yes I see that now

My eyes were a bit sore when I went to your profile to discover who might have written this and I mis-read :-)
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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

awesome

line, that lost poetic paradise your reference: "my soul remembers another place somewhere in time." classical poetic vision. nice job, a real throwback to the past in some ways.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

The Soul remembers....

pain as well as pleasure,a fresh reminder.A salve for the soul you have written Tuttey, Many Thanx. In Ink, David