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Tuttey
Sep 07, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fantasy of Perception

 

 
Slipping down a conundrum of emotions.
Setting boundaries, cleaving them down.
Walking the fine line of fate.
Cacophony seems to intertwine.
Space and time die away.
By design colors fade to gray.
Diminishing into gloom.
Lingering perceptions of what was.
Stave off the reality of what is.

 

— Tuttey, Sep 07, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 9 months ago

Brilliantly written

The way you have written this is excellent. Your imagery and metaphors work really well for me. Its beautifully written. Nice work. Kaz
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Jillian Botha

18 years 8 months ago

Well done!!!

Hi Tuttey I love the flow, the rythm and the words that have been used so perfectly in this one!!! Well done and thank you for sharing..... Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)
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Tuttey

18 years 8 months ago

Thank You!

Chocolate is the cure for whatever ails you. ;o)