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Tuttey
Aug 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Existence

Tragic is a life wrecked and sewn. Battling lessons that come hard. Sadly the front is never far off. Truncating each chapter learned. Once again the lessons taught.
— Tuttey, Aug 20, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

I read this aloud to myself

and it reads beautifully. The meaning is clear and well said, life often feels like a battle, sometimes behind enemy lines. I wonder about the word "sewn", wrecked and sewed back together? Or sowen with salt? Wish I could learn those hard lessons the first time. You always know you are on a winner when the comment is longer than the poem. 8) cheers, Jess
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Tuttey

18 years 9 months ago

Once again thank you

I used sewn as sewed back together. My vision is the essence of your being wrecked with stitches and scars.