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Straight to Concrete
From life under a bridge
seventeen years or so ago
occupation: Squatter
Redesigned our "bunker"
Seventeen years or so ago
occupation :Car juice jockey
Fire guts the fortress
fifteen years or so ago
occupation:gas,cigerette,and coffee vender
Return to remove ashes from purgatory
fifteen years or so ago
occupation:Skilled employee
Ascension to a shack
fourteen years or so ago
occupation:Night Clerk
Still in the dog house
ten years or so ago
occupation:Certified Employee
An option to upgrade
ten years or so ago
occupation:unemployed insurance collector
In transition house sitting
five years or so ago
occupation: Night Manager
A duplex to move into
three years or so ago
occupation:Company employee
A wonderful place to live
two years or so ago
occupation :Sceptical employee
Landlady is annoying
one year or so ago
occupation:Disgruntled Grave yard shift guy
Owners sell the complex
eight months or so ago
occupation:Harbinger
Sacrificed my lush pad
six months or so ago
occupation: thinking what’s next
Straight to concrete
four months or so ago
occupation:whatever I want to do
Pergatory is my studio
currently
occupation:Waiting to see
Critiques
Tuttey
18 years 10 months ago
Good Read
IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
Thank you so
Spirit Song
18 years 10 months ago
Creative delivery...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
Thank you as It does like Tuttey states need an adjustment
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