hardcorechick28

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Twisted Thoughts of A Mad Woman

Posted Jul 3, 2010 · 40 lines · 1 critiques

It's too much
Walls are closing in
Embracing me with sin
Same old bullshit
Happening all over again

Psychadelic images
Brings back the time
A crazy train of memories
Races through my mind
My once black and white life
Where everything seemed cut and dry
Slowly creeps on by

Years have passed
I thought it was over

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Go ahead, hit me again,
I'm as sick you, mother fucker

What I wouldn't give
To sink a bullet in your brain
Watch what's left
Of your burned out cells
Run down the drain

Talk is cheap
I'm tired of listening
If there's something I need to know
You'd better start confessing
Don't let me find out the hard way
You'll always get caught
Call her again
That snarly, nasty cyber slut

We all have to answer
For the pain we've caused
To ourselves and to others
We have to face the outcome

Crossing the line
Between fiction and fantasy
When reality loses its purpose
And insanity rights the wrong
Blood soaked thoughts
Stain the canvas of good deeds
As I find a way to move on

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July 2010
17 Sat

Critiqued
"Conflict of Interest..." by @Geezer
"Your two alter egos come together so well!!!! I have missed Killer...one of these days I will have to reserrect DeMona for him....."
03 Sat

Posted a poem
Twisted Thoughts of A Mad Woman
"It's too much"
Open thread 40 lines
June 2010
28 Mon

Received a critique
on Pandora's Box of Hell from @Geezer
"to not make the same mistake, is an eternal one. You have really sold your soul to the Light! You are trapped by your goodness, and willingness to believe the best of anyone. Do not fear, just keep trying to do good. Th…"
26 Sat

Received a critique
on Pandora's Box of Hell from @Geezer
"The older you get, the more aware of this you are, but that doesn't stop you from making the same mistake again, because usually the person that makes this mistake sees only the good side of things, the eternal optimist…"
26 Sat

Posted a poem
Pandora's Box of Hell
"Sitting in the corner"
Open thread 36 lines
26 Sat

Critiqued
"In The Light..." by @Geezer
"you summed it up perfectly.....at least there is a way to right the wrong....."
26 Sat

Critiqued
"In The Light..." by @Geezer
"the only thing we can hope this that the accusers luck runs out some day and karma comes back and bites them hard in the ass."
23 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
08 Tue

Critiqued
"Divine Rain..." by @Geezer
"Very well written and deep. I had a feeling Jason might have given some insight when i saw the part about welding."
May 2010
28 Fri

Critiqued
"Monsters in the closet..." by @Geezer
"then when we become adults and learn what real monsters are, the childhood monsters seem almost silly."
26 Wed

Critiqued
"#%@! off, and die!" by @Geezer
"to use writing as a method of freeing the soul from whatever is troubling us. I am working on one myself..to be posted sometime in the near future, if i can ever get a couple of quiet minutes to really think it out. Wil…"
26 Wed

Critiqued
"Monsters in the closet..." by @Geezer
"I love this poem!!!! And it is so true. As children, the scariest things in our lives are fairy tales or make believe monsters that dont really exist. It isnt until we get older that we realize what fear really is."
25 Tue

Critiqued
"#%@! off, and die!" by @Geezer
"exactly!! Seems to be how I am feeling toward alot of people these days. You summed it up in a few short phrases!!! Well done!!!"
April 2010
14 Wed

Received a critique
on Shadow's Death from @Geezer
"I wanted to read this right away! The first lines, captured me completely! Powerful lines. Sorry you have to be in such a funk, to write like this, but so very glad that you could get this out! WOW! Awesome job! ~ Gee"
14 Wed

Posted a poem
Shadow's Death
"Sun fades"
Open thread 31 lines
March 2010
11 Thu

Received a critique
on DeMona's Letter from @Candlewitch
"I think it is great. It just goes to show that monster's have hearts which can yearn. Love, it! Always, Cat"
10 Wed

Received a critique
on DeMona's Letter from @Geezer
"Sounds as though it is a real letter. I loved it! Couched in subtle hints, as though to frustrate unauthorized readers. Just letting him know that she is thinking of him, and wishing for his presence. Knowing the circum…"
10 Wed

Received a critique
on DeMona's Letter from @weirdelf
"about Neopoet being a workshop. So all you will accept is "this is lovely dear" Facebook is good. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible"
09 Tue

Posted a poem
DeMona's Letter
"My Darling"
Open thread 27 lines
03 Wed

Received a critique
on Out of Touch from @magics02
"This one is good, really good Hard Core, Hope all is well for you. love Mona not demona lol"
02 Tue

Posted a poem
Out of Touch
"It had been a while"
Open thread 27 lines
February 2010
22 Mon

Received a critique
on The Unseen from @magics02
"Some how I keep reading this one over and over and it moves me. Like the spirit that lives in all of us and in the unseen. I find this poem to be very well thougth out and remarkable hardcore and how is the weather up t…"
15 Mon

Posted a poem
The Unseen
"In the night I walk"
Open thread 30 lines
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Killer Valentine
"Full moon"
Open thread 60 lines
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Lonley In Love
"Together in a room"
Open thread 43 lines
January 2010
29 Fri

Posted a poem
From The Eyes of A Ghost
"The inevitable end"
Open thread 26 lines
27 Wed

Posted a poem
Earth Bound
"Grey clouds"
Open thread 18 lines
18 Mon

Posted a poem
Coffee House Courtship (Killer and DeMona's Chance Meeting)
"Alone in a corner booth"
Open thread 32 lines
13 Wed

Posted a poem
Orphaness (Rise of DeMona)
"Though born into light"
Open thread 39 lines
September 2009
15 Tue

Highest posting month
September 2009 — 6 poems
August 2009
30 Sun

Most-discussed work
Suicide Chick

14 critiques to date.
July 2009
08 Wed

First critique offered
on "Anubis" by @Geezer
June 2009
23 Tue

First publication
Becoming the Vampire
23 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

15 years of membership

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"Conflict of Interest..." by @Geezer

on Pandora's Box of Hell from @Geezer

on Pandora's Box of Hell from @Geezer

"In The Light..." by @Geezer

"In The Light..." by @Geezer

One year of membership

"Divine Rain..." by @Geezer

"Monsters in the closet..." by @Geezer

"#%@! off, and die!" by @Geezer

"Monsters in the closet..." by @Geezer

"#%@! off, and die!" by @Geezer

on Shadow's Death from @Geezer

on DeMona's Letter from @Candlewitch

on DeMona's Letter from @Geezer

on DeMona's Letter from @weirdelf

on Out of Touch from @magics02

on The Unseen from @magics02

September 2009 — 6 poems

on "Anubis" by @Geezer

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