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Out of Touch

It had been a while
Since they talked
Her unexplainable distance
Caused him to doubt

If he only knew
How she felt
The dizziness
That took her over
Almost too much to bare
How would she tell him?
Would he still be there?

Sleepless nights
A decision to be made
New life was precious
Not to be thrown away
Something to look forward to
Yet still afraid

What would they say?
Would anyone be glad?
Or just find a way
To make her sad

The past still hovers
Like a reaper calling
The dead
Would it stop her cold
Or could she take this little blessing
And move on?


— hardcorechick28, Mar 02, 2010

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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

yes

it does bred alot of anxiety for me.....makes me very nervous
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

everything

is moving along, Mona. Things have been really chaotic, alot of things are going to change in a short amount of time, so i am bracing myself for the repercussions more or less. i also miss chatting with you and am hoping to have more time for neo in the near future. talk soon