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Killer Valentine

Full moon
Perfect night
Anxiously she awaits
Beneath the dim street light

Checking her watch
Wondering where he was
Hoping the wait
Wouldn't be too long

From behind the wall
He slipped
Through the darkness
He came
Wrapping his hands
Around her throat

Hello Baby
He whispered
Sorry I'm late
Hope you didn't think
I forgot our date

Roses inked
In blood of the freshest kind
He gave to her
With love in mind

Tonight's dinner
Thrown over his shoulder
A foot still hanging out
There would be plenty of leftovers about
She smiled and breathed in
Glad he made it
Dinner first
Then his present
For dessert

Roast leg of former spouse
Glazed in a marrow sauce
Didn't break their heart
To eat that louse
His ex was better off
Without him

Killer winked his eye
Sipping on formaldehyde wine
In all his years
He had never seen
Anything so fine

DeMona stood, feeling his call
Crawling across the table
Baring it all

Stealing his lady
From her wooden perch
Up the stairs
They went

Rolling on to the bed
Firing up the sheets
Brutal love making
Raises the heat

Wiping the sweat
From their brow
Quietly they lay
Thinking to themselves
This was the perfect way
To spend Valentines Day










— hardcorechick28, Feb 09, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 4 months ago

Terrific

Terrific and different, it really is an easy read. I like this a lot and think i like the comical side to you. Regards Roscoe..
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hardcorechick28

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you

My father in law, Geezer and I collaborate on the Killer/DeMona series. Killer is his character and DeMona is mine. We write individually about them as well as have recently made them a couple. There is more on my page as well as on his. Check it out, there is a comical side to all....thanks again
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Ya know...

I don't think I have anything to add. I was going to treat it as a rhymer, but, it truly isn't, even though you did rhyme a couple of lines here and there. I think it is fine just the way it is! Let us wait to see what kind of comments you get. Killer is all a fired up for their date. He has picked up a nice dessert, and he and DeMona, will have it after the great dinner they will cook together. Really great work! ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

thank you

for your high praise. I always appreciate whatever you have to offer....i made a few tweaks this morning which I think really improved the piece.. DeMona cant wait to see what you and Killer have in store for her....for once she is looking forward to valentine's day. :)