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hardcorechick28
Jan 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dark Cupid

Dark Cupid
With eyes of coal
Light the candles
As you go
Dip your poison arrows well

Beautiful Dominatrix
From the gates of hell
Shoot them one by one
Let them fall

Lying gets you no where
Karma's a bitch
Those who deceive
Deserve what they get
Who is the next on her list?
— hardcorechick28, Jan 11, 2010

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DloganB

DloganB

16 years 4 months ago

NICE

Dark Cupid it is so true you missed the evil and your arrow flew hit me square in between my eyes now I watch my own demise GOOD PIECE I like the way it reads I like the content good stuff
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hardcorechick28

16 years 4 months ago

thank you

i like what you wrote to go along with it. it ties in really well together...glad you enjoyed it!!!
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Damn those arrows...

Them things hurt like hell! Hope they give someone a few sleepless nights! Your bow sounds like the bow of Karma. A powerful force when aimed well. Your shit shield is in full force. Killer will charge the batteries whenever you need. ~ Love ya, ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 4 months ago

did you

accidently get stuck with one of my arrows? I just might need Killer to recharge the batteries periodically. I have a few people that could use a visit from him at the moment. Dark Cupid would be happy to lend him some of those poison arrows. I am sure he could find places to stick them. Glad you liked it....Love Ya...Carrie