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Jun 23, 2009
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Becoming the Vampire
Waking, darkness enfolds the day, day is the night
The night embraces the moon, so bright is its light
Waking, darkness creeps over the bed, enfolding you
You become one with the monster, cold morning dew
It takes over, turning you inside out, dark soul
Freeze! The night is in you, keeping you close
Claws and teeth, the battle is on, no one to save
No one to guard, this deathly hold, blood that you crave
White face, bloody fang, you are the monster afar
Take your new identity, it is who you are
The night embraces the moon, so bright is its light
Waking, darkness creeps over the bed, enfolding you
You become one with the monster, cold morning dew
It takes over, turning you inside out, dark soul
Freeze! The night is in you, keeping you close
Claws and teeth, the battle is on, no one to save
No one to guard, this deathly hold, blood that you crave
White face, bloody fang, you are the monster afar
Take your new identity, it is who you are
— hardcorechick28, Jun 23, 2009
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hardcorechick28
17 years 1 month ago
hey
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So glad you have joined
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Carrie,
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Carrie
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