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#%@! off, and die!

If I go to hell...

I think I will meet you there

To say that it is truth

Is beyond what I imagine

Beliefs are only that...

— Geezer, May 24, 2010

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

Well...

If I were to hold my breath, it sure wouldn't be long enough to matter. Some people don't understand, and will believe what they believe. LOL Thanks, ~ Gee
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

#%@! off, and die!Don’t

#%@! off, and die! Don't mind if I do, Sir Gee. ;-) ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

I understood your poem, your

I understood your poem, your rant, and totally concur, however, I was taking it another direction.... ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
M

magics02

16 years ago

Geez Geez

Who pissed the shit out of you today? LOL Tell whoever it is they need to go to chat some Saturday night and be with you and others too. You must of had a bad day, I have those too, as today after the weekend so many coming in beat up, crying, limping, shaking, its the world we live in nowadays, lots of people with some serious anger issues that want to take their aggressions out at anyone or anything that seems to cross their path. Watch out for those silent ones too. Alot of people going postal lately. Be vigilant. There are shadows lurking and waiting for their next hit. I hope you felt better after this but something tells me you would like to say a whole hell of a lot more here. Geez just a tease here. Love ya guy and by the way you make a great chat host on Saturday nights! Peace at ya guy Mona xoxoxo
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

It was just a rant...

because someone was harassed here, and made to feel uncomfortable, to the point they wanted to chuck it, and leave. I have no details, and wouldn't tell if I did. But...I have seen some things lately, that kinda tic me off. I respect people's right to post what they like, but for a person to push their beliefs off on someone else...and say that they are condemned for it, just tics my tock. ~ Gee xxx P.S. thanks for the compliment on hosting, all of the people that come to my chats, are what makes them fun and keeps me doing it. And without the help of certain people, and the tech-help they provide, I would be lost.
S

scribbler

16 years ago

and die

In your title I think you misspelled the first word Should be *&#! ha!ha!...scribbler
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Gee

I love the message of this one ... biggest smiles I get it :) nothing to crit love and higgliest bugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

I knew ...

that you would get it. I hope that the people that needed to get the message, got it! Ivan got it. Thanks, ~ love and hig bugs, ~ Gee
lou

lou

16 years ago

Dear Gee

This poem reads like fair comment. love lou xx
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

It was poetic commentary...

LOL, and to be fair, I think some people that read it, were offended, though it wasn't intended for them. So I apologise to them. They probably won't know that I am doing it though, and I guess I will have to let them think what they want. ~ Love ya, ~ Gee
H

hardcorechick28

16 years ago

my sentiments

exactly!! Seems to be how I am feeling toward alot of people these days. You summed it up in a few short phrases!!! Well done!!!
H

hardcorechick28

16 years ago

always good

to use writing as a method of freeing the soul from whatever is troubling us. I am working on one myself..to be posted sometime in the near future, if i can ever get a couple of quiet minutes to really think it out. Will let you know when done
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

I don't think...

I have ever heard you condemn anyone, [saying that "God will get you",] for what they have written, if you did, then you would have rattled my cage. I'm in the group that says: If anyone doesn't like the theme of what somebody has written, Don't read it. If a person can't keep to the critiquing of the poem, without condemning the poet, for the content, then don't comment! Did you do that?I don't think so. If anyone wants to write a poem, that says I am going to hell, then I support their right to say so. I will read it, and laugh. ~ Love ya, ~ Gee
themoonman

themoonman

16 years ago

Gee...

Well there ya go, said with sharpened clarity too... thanks for being here sir
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

There ya go...

i see clear that that is the way it should be, and it is my extreme pleasure to be here amongst the finest poets ever! I try to measure up, Thanks, ~ Gee
L

lyz

16 years ago

Dear Gee

Title got me in. A straight to the point write and what a man you are. Wonderful. Pleased to know you. XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

I was brought up...

to believe that it doesn't matter what color you are, what religion you follow, or what your sexual preferences are, you deserve the common courtesy of being able to be who and what you are, with no harassment, or persecution. And that you don't push your beliefs in anyone else's face. The only thing that matters, is what you are in your heart, and how you treat me and the other people around you.I love being here, and as I said; I feel like I am amongst some of the most beautiful people in the world. Love ya, ~ Gee xx